Haley Fisher Poet Rhyme

I Am But a Mortal Craving Your Existence

You are a bright fallen star from the mesmerizing sight up above,
You make my tender heart pump pure blood of joy with just a minor glance,
If only you would grant me the blissful privilege to call you my love,
To my painful despair your angelic nose is pointed to the sky and you look down upon me,
If only given the honour to acknowledge my existence that craves your mystical romance,
But because of my economic status and laughable looks me, you shall never see,
As more than a dirty petty jester who could never compare to your immense power,
I am foolish to ever have thought I stood a pleading chance,
To you your majesty I will forever bow down and cower,
Until I feel your heart beat back then I shall manoeuvre into my sprinting stance.

June 12, 2018

Rhyme Time 4- 10 Lines Poetry Contest
Sponsored by:  Laura Loo 

3rd Place

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Andrea Dietrich July 16, 2018 at 5:19 PM You captured well the way a person feels to be looked down upon. There were a few people who made me feel this way in my life. Great job and belated congrats.

Eve Roper June 30, 2018 at 11:22 AM Congratulations, Haley, on your win.. Lovely poem Hugs Eve ~`* Haley Fisher July 8, 2018 at 5:26 PM Thank you very much. It was fun to write.

Gregory Richard Barden June 29, 2018 at 9:57 PM Very fresh and creative, and an excellent interpretation of the theme, phrased with intent and imagery! Congratulations on your wonderful win, Haley - blessings and best wishes for continued success, my friend! :-) <3 Haley Fisher June 29, 2018 at 11:51 PM Thank you so much for your kind words and encouragement.

Susan Gentry June 29, 2018 at 7:33 PM Congratulations. Written from the heart and goes so well with your theme. :) Haley Fisher June 29, 2018 at 11:39 PM Thank you Susan. I really appreciate it. It was a fun theme.

Joseph May June 29, 2018 at 1:13 PM Congrats on your win Haley.. Haley Fisher June 29, 2018 at 11:38 PM Thank you very much Joseph.

John Gondolf June 29, 2018 at 8:52 AM Haley, back to say congrats! John Haley Fisher June 29, 2018 at 11:47 PM Thank you John .

Beautiful Scars June 29, 2018 at 7:10 AM great poem sweet Haley, really enjoyed it...thank you for your entry and congratulations on your placement. Be blessed, -luloo :) Haley Fisher June 29, 2018 at 7:33 AM Thank you so much. I really enjoyed this contest. It was extremely creative which I think helps me learn how to write more interesting poetry.

John Gondolf June 25, 2018 at 5:46 PM Your poems are all written with such strong emotion, Haley, nicely done. Best of luck in the contest. John Haley Fisher June 26, 2018 at 1:27 PM Thank you John. I'm glad strong emotion comes through my written words.

Robert Lindley June 20, 2018 at 10:33 AM Another heartfelt and glowing jewel you have crafted my friend. Stay true to thy art, to thy heart's truth and love's bidding. Let thy ink paste art upon the page.. A fav... Haley Fisher June 23, 2018 at 8:05 AM Thank you so much. I feel encouraged by your beautifully written words.