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I Am Alone

The visitors left me with empty rooms tasting like the last bite of cone beneath my favorite ice cream. Bare mattresses confront misty eyes and small piles of laundry stand at the foot of each bed, like left over food. Silence seems impolite, interrupting conversations still echoing in this cool place that was warm an hour ago. I am alone.

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Date: 12/28/2018 1:28:00 PM
Yes, this emotion does linger- after a holiday, such as Christmas is over. The truth is, those that are surrounded by many- truly can feel alone at times. Just remember, you are never really alone. My best to you. ~ Brandy
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Gerald Greene
Date: 12/28/2018 3:21:00 PM
Right, and we all experience this feeling. Thanks, and may your celebrations be happy!!
Date: 12/28/2018 11:51:00 AM
A heartfelt poem, very well expressed. Peace and rest.
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Gerald Greene
Date: 12/28/2018 3:20:00 PM
Thank you Lawrence
Date: 12/28/2018 7:40:00 AM
I can feel your words. Well done. :)
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Gerald Greene
Date: 12/28/2018 7:47:00 AM
Thank you Heidi.

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