I Am Alone

The visitors left me 
with empty rooms 
tasting like the last bite of cone 
beneath my favorite ice cream.

Bare mattresses confront misty eyes 
and small piles of laundry 
stand at the foot of each bed, 
like left over food.

Silence seems impolite, 
interrupting conversations
still echoing in this cool place 
that was warm an hour ago.

I am alone.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Nicole Avatar
December 28, 2018 at 1:28 PM
Yes, this emotion does linger- after a holiday, such as Christmas is over. The truth is, those that are surrounded by many- truly can feel alone at times. Just remember, you are never really alone. My best to you. ~ Brandy
Greene Avatar
December 28, 2018 at 3:21 PM
Right, and we all experience this feeling. Thanks, and may your celebrations be happy!!
Sharp Avatar
December 28, 2018 at 11:51 AM
A heartfelt poem, very well expressed. Peace and rest.
Greene Avatar
December 28, 2018 at 3:20 PM
Thank you Lawrence
Sands Avatar
December 28, 2018 at 7:40 AM
I can feel your words. Well done. :)
Greene Avatar
December 28, 2018 at 7:47 AM
Thank you Heidi.
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