S.Jagathsimhan Nair Poet Free verse

I Am Alone-2

I am alone

I’m all alone
Yet again
In this sparsely populated plain
My dearheart having gone off the screen 
Giving me  a really nasty turn
To hit the sad way of the forlorn
But your love I never did spurn
Thinking of you in the dreamlands that burn.

And just once
Only once
Hand me my overdue recompense
Fill me  with an ounce of tenderness
Just strum these hyper strung weird chords
So I could moan thanks in all fairness
To the one beating the beast out of breasts
A prelude to  pulverising the pelvis
But your love I never did spurn
In Cupid’s fair, in fairylands that burn.

I will wait
At any rate
For whatever it is you deem right
To this one with a lot of blights
Turned inside out and flaming now bright
Crush to get crushed by taut thighs at night
But your love I never did spurn
Thinking of you in the scrublands that burn.

I’m all alone…yet again
In this sparsely populated plain
My dearheart having gone off the screen
Giving me a really nasty turn
To hit the sad way of the forlorn
But your love I never did spurn
Thinking of you in the dreamlands that burn.

16 Feb 13


For Cyndi Macmillan's " My spice box:Sensual poetry" contest

For Catie Lindsay's Freeverse contest on 6th mar 13

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Saurabh Gupta April 18, 2013 at 12:37 PM so soft..deeply alone........

Lucilla Carrillo March 10, 2013 at 11:33 AM This is great and I think it will win in the contest. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

Len Gasun March 2, 2013 at 5:10 AM My hearty congratulations on your fantastic win my dear friend, SJ! A great write indeed! love/hugs, Leonora

Poet Destroyer A March 1, 2013 at 7:57 PM Jag, :-) congratulations with your sweet and spicy win in Cyndi's out of the box" SENSUAL POETRY. ADULTS ONLY." Contest* Always & Forever ~LINDA

Debbie Guzzi March 1, 2013 at 6:16 PM Full of lust and longing and just the right touch of reverance. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Charlotte Puddifoot March 1, 2013 at 3:25 PM "I am alone" - surely not, with sensual work like this! a really unusual piece, your poems so often have an intriguing depth and undertone :)

Sukmawati Komala February 20, 2013 at 12:07 AM very amazing write dear Jag... i do enjoyed reading this morning <3 luv and lights :) Sk

Skyler Dawn February 19, 2013 at 4:44 PM Love this poem...

John Loving Iii February 18, 2013 at 11:06 PM I like this it always touches me that a woman would wait. Sooner or latter God will show me what I've been missing.

Andrea Dietrich February 18, 2013 at 10:33 PM this is a very interesting one from you, Jag. I love the repetition of the key lines. Also, it feels lonely. Yes, one that is very interesting to read.

Sean L Sanders February 18, 2013 at 3:13 PM Thinging of you in the dreamlands that burn excellent poetrysoup poet

Anne-Lise Andresen February 17, 2013 at 4:04 AM - A touching and "lonely" poem --- but, beautifully written Jag ! - Have a lovely Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)