Kash Poet Poet Rhyme

I Am a Gardenia

You are so lovely my secret love
and only for you again I am here
my every petal is a love letter
and fragrance its ink just for you dear!

When the spring breeze just starts to blow
open your window and listen to me
from your garden a message for you
a love song from gardenia it will be!



Gardenia--secret love,you are lovely

Date- 6th May 2015

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Anindya Mohan Tagore February 23, 2016 at 2:50 AM Oh! dear, how romantic!

Skat A May 24, 2015 at 11:54 PM KASH, Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. SKAT love

Emile Pinet May 13, 2015 at 8:41 AM The author uses good imagery and maintains a poetic flow through the whole piece. Emile

Casarah Nance May 10, 2015 at 7:10 AM I love that line-my every petal is a love letter and fragrance its ink just for you dear-awesomely said! grats on your win kash :)

Connie Marcum Wong May 10, 2015 at 2:10 AM A favorite flower is the gardenia with its heavenly scent. How wonderfully you composed this beautiful poem my friend!

Poet Destroyer A May 9, 2015 at 8:18 PM Kash, so sweet seeing you here. A wonderful poem and flower to be. LINDA

Skat A May 9, 2015 at 6:32 PM Kash. CONGRATULATIONS on the win. :) SKAT

Kim Merryman May 9, 2015 at 5:13 PM Gardenia is my favorite flower! Great write, Kash! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Julia Ward May 9, 2015 at 2:21 PM A well-thought out poem... Congratulations, Kash.

Carrie Richards May 9, 2015 at 9:33 AM This lovely verse makes one swoon, with such affection ! So romantic, and filled with metaphors. Congratulations, Kash.....it is so nice to see you back here once again ! :)

Darlene Gifford May 9, 2015 at 7:50 AM Congratulations, Kash, on your win. And how deserving you are! I especially liked the lines "Every petal is a love letter" Something every woman would love to hear. And thank you for taking the time to read my poem and commenting on (I am the Lily of the Valley) ....Darlene

Constance La France May 9, 2015 at 7:48 AM Kash this is a lovely poem so enchanting well done and thanks for visiting my flower poem

Joseph May May 9, 2015 at 7:41 AM Very nice Kash...Congrats on your win

Jan Allison May 9, 2015 at 5:30 AM Dropping back with my congratulations Kash:-) Hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich May 9, 2015 at 1:54 AM so very very sweet, my old friend! You ARE a gardenia indeed. Please will you return to soup!! Congrats in my contest and it's been a big surprise seeing you back here!

Eve Roper May 6, 2015 at 5:03 PM Wonderful write on of my favorite flower the scent brings back happy childhood memories and when they're in bloom I bring a bouquet in my home for the heavenly scent :~)

Jan Allison May 6, 2015 at 7:57 AM beautifully penned lovely imagery of the secret love - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx