Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Poet Verse

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I Am a Child During Christmas

I AM A CHILD DURING CHRISTMAS


Sing
the joys
of 
Christmas
carols: La!
La!la! 
Dance
and pray
that troubles
be miles away!
Evergreen 
boughs fill,
each
doors home--
their scents stir
child-like
lips
to smile
long!
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***Waltz Wave
4:06pm, December 09,2015

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Vladislav Raven January 7, 2016 at 8:47 PM Hi Olive, when i did read the title of this piece i had to come in. I am the child at Christmas. short, sways wonderfully and is to the point. I did enjoy the read. Made me smile and feel good inside. Lovely read....Vladislav.

Paul Callus December 31, 2015 at 3:20 AM Congratulations on this fine win, Olive_eloi! Let us sing la la la:) may your lips smile long:) hugs // paul

Skat A December 29, 2015 at 9:55 PM OLIVE, a beautiful win.... Congrats on your placement. Love **SKAT**

Balveen Cheema December 29, 2015 at 8:50 PM Oh Olive, this is so beautifully penned! Congrats!

Andrea Dietrich December 29, 2015 at 4:33 PM Yayyyy, Congratulations to you.

Jan Allison December 29, 2015 at 1:58 PM Dropping back with my congrats Olive:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Merryman December 29, 2015 at 1:11 PM Olive, I enjoyed your uplifting Christmas waltz! Congrats on your placement and thank you for participating! Happy New Year! Love, Kim

Poesy Relish December 23, 2015 at 11:50 AM this has the feel of a child waltzing away singing a song during the festive season... nice one olive

James Fraser December 16, 2015 at 12:45 PM Love the child in you Olive, it's endearing. So looking forward to see your joy Christmas 2016 ;-) warm festive hugs//James xx

James Inman December 15, 2015 at 10:12 AM Lovely write, Olive. Reads smoothly and has a sweet sentiment.

Paul Callus December 12, 2015 at 6:31 AM This is the right mood for Christmas, Olive_eloi! You transmit joy and happiness. gl in the contest. Hugs // paul Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser December 24, 2015 at 8:09 PM Thanks much Paul.. =`) I just want to resonate joy and warmth, youthfulness in my poem!~Olive ELoisa =`)

Sandra Haight December 11, 2015 at 1:32 PM Very sweet, Olive. Love your Waltz Wave, and all the best for the contest. Hugs, Sandra Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser December 24, 2015 at 8:08 PM thank you so much Sandra. =`) this a sweet comment .. =`)

Andrea Dietrich December 9, 2015 at 8:38 PM so cute, and joyous. and yes, let's jump those waves together. How I adore doing that. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser December 17, 2015 at 8:50 AM Andie, I love it too.. =`) weeee!

Richard Lamoureux December 9, 2015 at 8:15 AM Thanks for creating a celebratory mood! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser December 16, 2015 at 8:31 PM thanks much Richard, I appreciate your comment.. =`)

Jan Allison December 9, 2015 at 6:35 AM Sounds like a Beautiful Christmas Olive - good luck in the contest Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser December 10, 2015 at 2:53 AM thanks much Jan.. =`) I bit another challenge. =`)