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I Am a Child During Christmas

I AM A CHILD DURING CHRISTMAS


Sing
the joys
of 
Christmas
carols: La!
La!la! 
Dance
and pray
that troubles
be miles away!
Evergreen 
boughs fill,
each
doors home--
their scents stir
child-like
lips
to smile
long!
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***Waltz Wave
4:06pm, December 09,2015

Copyright © Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser | Year Posted 2015

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Vladislav Raven Date: 1/7/2016 8:47:00 PM Hi Olive, when i did read the title of this piece i had to come in. I am the child at Christmas. short, sways wonderfully and is to the point. I did enjoy the read. Made me smile and feel good inside. Lovely read....Vladislav. Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 12/31/2015 3:20:00 AM Congratulations on this fine win, Olive_eloi! Let us sing la la la:) may your lips smile long:) hugs // paul Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 12/29/2015 9:55:00 PM OLIVE, a beautiful win.... Congrats on your placement. Love **SKAT** Login to Reply

Balveen Cheema Date: 12/29/2015 8:50:00 PM Oh Olive, this is so beautifully penned! Congrats! Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 12/29/2015 4:33:00 PM Yayyyy, Congratulations to you. Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 12/29/2015 1:58:00 PM Dropping back with my congrats Olive:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply

Kim Merryman Date: 12/29/2015 1:11:00 PM Olive, I enjoyed your uplifting Christmas waltz! Congrats on your placement and thank you for participating! Happy New Year! Love, Kim Login to Reply

Poesy Relish Date: 12/23/2015 11:50:00 AM this has the feel of a child waltzing away singing a song during the festive season... nice one olive Login to Reply

James Fraser Date: 12/16/2015 12:45:00 PM Love the child in you Olive, it's endearing. So looking forward to see your joy Christmas 2016 ;-) warm festive hugs//James xx Login to Reply

James Inman Date: 12/15/2015 10:12:00 AM Lovely write, Olive. Reads smoothly and has a sweet sentiment. Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 12/12/2015 6:31:00 AM This is the right mood for Christmas, Olive_eloi! You transmit joy and happiness. gl in the contest. Hugs // paul Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 12/24/2015 8:09:00 PM Thanks much Paul.. =`) I just want to resonate joy and warmth, youthfulness in my poem!~Olive ELoisa =`)

Sandra Haight Date: 12/11/2015 1:32:00 PM Very sweet, Olive. Love your Waltz Wave, and all the best for the contest. Hugs, Sandra Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 12/24/2015 8:08:00 PM thank you so much Sandra. =`) this a sweet comment .. =`)

Andrea Dietrich Date: 12/9/2015 8:38:00 PM so cute, and joyous. and yes, let's jump those waves together. How I adore doing that. Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 12/17/2015 8:50:00 AM Andie, I love it too.. =`) weeee!

Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/9/2015 8:15:00 AM Thanks for creating a celebratory mood! Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 12/16/2015 8:31:00 PM thanks much Richard, I appreciate your comment.. =`)

Jan Allison Date: 12/9/2015 6:35:00 AM Sounds like a Beautiful Christmas Olive - good luck in the contest Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 12/10/2015 2:53:00 AM thanks much Jan.. =`) I bit another challenge. =`)