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I AM A CHILD DURING CHRISTMAS Sing the joys of Christmas carols: La! La!la! Dance and pray that troubles be miles away! Evergreen boughs fill, each doors home-- their scents stir child-like lips to smile long! _______________________________________ ***Waltz Wave 4:06pm, December 09,2015

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Date: 1/7/2016 8:47:00 PM
Hi Olive, when i did read the title of this piece i had to come in. I am the child at Christmas. short, sways wonderfully and is to the point. I did enjoy the read. Made me smile and feel good inside. Lovely read....Vladislav.
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Date: 12/31/2015 3:20:00 AM
Congratulations on this fine win, Olive_eloi! Let us sing la la la:) may your lips smile long:) hugs // paul
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Date: 12/29/2015 9:55:00 PM
OLIVE, a beautiful win.... Congrats on your placement. Love **SKAT**
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Date: 12/29/2015 8:50:00 PM
Oh Olive, this is so beautifully penned! Congrats!
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Date: 12/29/2015 4:33:00 PM
Yayyyy, Congratulations to you.
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Date: 12/29/2015 1:58:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Olive:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/29/2015 1:11:00 PM
Olive, I enjoyed your uplifting Christmas waltz! Congrats on your placement and thank you for participating! Happy New Year! Love, Kim
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Date: 12/23/2015 11:50:00 AM
this has the feel of a child waltzing away singing a song during the festive season... nice one olive
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Date: 12/16/2015 12:45:00 PM
Love the child in you Olive, it's endearing. So looking forward to see your joy Christmas 2016 ;-) warm festive hugs//James xx
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Date: 12/15/2015 10:12:00 AM
Lovely write, Olive. Reads smoothly and has a sweet sentiment.
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Date: 12/12/2015 6:31:00 AM
This is the right mood for Christmas, Olive_eloi! You transmit joy and happiness. gl in the contest. Hugs // paul
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 12/24/2015 8:09:00 PM
Thanks much Paul.. =`) I just want to resonate joy and warmth, youthfulness in my poem!~Olive ELoisa =`)
Date: 12/11/2015 1:32:00 PM
Very sweet, Olive. Love your Waltz Wave, and all the best for the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 12/24/2015 8:08:00 PM
thank you so much Sandra. =`) this a sweet comment .. =`)
Date: 12/9/2015 8:38:00 PM
so cute, and joyous. and yes, let's jump those waves together. How I adore doing that.
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 12/17/2015 8:50:00 AM
Andie, I love it too.. =`) weeee!
Date: 12/9/2015 8:15:00 AM
Thanks for creating a celebratory mood!
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 12/16/2015 8:31:00 PM
thanks much Richard, I appreciate your comment.. =`)
Date: 12/9/2015 6:35:00 AM
Sounds like a Beautiful Christmas Olive - good luck in the contest
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Date: 12/10/2015 2:53:00 AM
thanks much Jan.. =`) I bit another challenge. =`)

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