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I Am a Bubble

I am a bubble.
People see through me.
And yet, there are still few who see wonders
in my almost invisible rainbow-like colours.
With their slightest attentions and most timid smiles,
I am appreciated.

I am a bubble.
With the air I move and dance,
Carefree and unmindful while I soar.
As I reach the sky, I fade.
Only to join the wind once more.

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Poet Destroyer A

April 5, 2015 at 11:23 PM

JC, Thank you for the sweet reply to my comment. Have yourself a Happy Easter Love LINDA

Daver Austin

June 9, 2014 at 3:12 PM

Love your imagination and your attitude. Congrats on the selection. daver

Jc Conge

November 11, 2014 at 12:08 AM

Thanks Daver. I'm glad that's what you think about the poem. -JC

Poet Destroyer A

June 9, 2014 at 7:33 AM

JC, Congratulations on having your poem Featured on the Poetry Soups Home Page. Enjoy the coming week. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Jc Conge

November 11, 2014 at 12:06 AM

Thank you Linda. Hope you're having a great time too. - JC

Dr.Ram Mehta

June 9, 2014 at 7:07 AM

A piece of good poetry. Keep it up and congrats on your poem selected to be featured, JC

Jc Conge

November 11, 2014 at 12:09 AM

Thanks Dr. Ram. Appreciate the greetings! - JC

Mohan Chutani

June 4, 2014 at 3:24 AM

JC, a very beautiful poem with nice imagery.Mohan

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 29, 2014 at 12:57 PM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, JC. :) - I choose your first written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Skat A

May 28, 2014 at 6:43 PM

J C Conge, , , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Faye Gibson

May 28, 2014 at 5:46 PM

Welcome to Poetry Soup, JC. I believe you will find much support here. Keep writing; comment on the poems of other writers and most of them will return the favor. Best wishes.

Poet Destroyer A

May 28, 2014 at 11:36 AM

J C Conge, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@