Hija De La Luna Poet Sedoka

I Am a 6

From a peaceful flow
The river waters fall down
Crash, churn, hit the depths, then go.

Passing through my bank
I feel its meditation
And see its past free of woes.


9.28.14

1/5/1976: Path number: 1+5=6

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Brenda Meier-Hans October 4, 2014 at 8:56 AM Congratulations on your HM Hija. Hija De La Luna October 4, 2014 at 10:21 AM Thank you, Brenda!

Jan Allison October 4, 2014 at 7:34 AM Dropping back with my congratulations Hija:-) Hugs Jan xx Hija De La Luna October 4, 2014 at 10:21 AM thanks, Jan! hugs

Dr.Ram Mehta October 4, 2014 at 6:34 AM Dropping back to congratulate you, Luna Hija De La Luna October 4, 2014 at 10:22 AM Thanks, Dr. Mehta!

Andrea Dietrich October 4, 2014 at 2:21 AM sorry, I had to leave suddenly so wanted to come back and tell you that I enjoyed the message of this sedoka.

Andrea Dietrich October 4, 2014 at 2:15 AM congrats in my contest, dear. You would only say crash, not crashes. Thanks for supporting my poetry contest! Hija De La Luna October 4, 2014 at 10:20 AM thanks for the HM, Andrea. and thank you for bringing the error to my attention. my bad, i copy pasted in haste. i'll paste my final piece. :)) God bless!

Regina Mcintosh September 29, 2014 at 11:59 PM Best for the contest. Happy writing with love and prayers, Gina Hija De La Luna October 3, 2014 at 9:38 PM thank you, Gina! God bless and happy writing, too!

Dr.Ram Mehta September 28, 2014 at 9:22 AM Beautiful Sedoka nicely composed, good luck in the contest, Luna Hija De La Luna September 28, 2014 at 7:25 PM thanks, Dr. Ram

Anne-Lise Andresen September 28, 2014 at 8:47 AM - A lovely poem Hija ! - Luck in contest ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Hija De La Luna September 28, 2014 at 7:25 PM thanks, Anne!

Casarah Nance September 28, 2014 at 7:24 AM I love it. :)

Jan Allison September 28, 2014 at 6:45 AM beautifully penned with lovely imagery Hija I find this write very soothing - good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx Hija De La Luna September 28, 2014 at 6:47 AM thank you, Jan! delightful words from you as always! hugs

Tim Smith September 28, 2014 at 6:39 AM Warm and inviting.... You are a true six...hugs Tim Hija De La Luna September 28, 2014 at 6:55 AM thanks, will check it :) Tim Smith September 28, 2014 at 6:49 AM Andrea describes them in her blog Hija De La Luna September 28, 2014 at 6:48 AM thank you, Tim. got to know what a true six is :) hugs