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I Am a 6

From a peaceful flow
The river waters fall down
Crash, churn, hit the depths, then go.

Passing through my bank
I feel its meditation
And see its past free of woes.


9.28.14

1/5/1976: Path number: 1+5=6

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Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 10/4/2014 8:56:00 AM

Congratulations on your HM Hija.

Hija De La Luna
Date: 10/4/2014 10:21:00 AM

Thank you, Brenda!

Jan Allison

Date: 10/4/2014 7:34:00 AM

Dropping back with my congratulations Hija:-) Hugs Jan xx

Hija De La Luna
Date: 10/4/2014 10:21:00 AM

thanks, Jan! hugs

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/4/2014 6:34:00 AM

Dropping back to congratulate you, Luna

Hija De La Luna
Date: 10/4/2014 10:22:00 AM

Thanks, Dr. Mehta!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/4/2014 2:21:00 AM

sorry, I had to leave suddenly so wanted to come back and tell you that I enjoyed the message of this sedoka.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/4/2014 2:15:00 AM

congrats in my contest, dear. You would only say crash, not crashes. Thanks for supporting my poetry contest!

Hija De La Luna
Date: 10/4/2014 10:20:00 AM

thanks for the HM, Andrea. and thank you for bringing the error to my attention. my bad, i copy pasted in haste. i'll paste my final piece. :)) God bless!