Mourning Mist Poet Free verse

I Am 45 But Really 16

I may be 45 but I act like I am sixteen instead,
I never take responsibility it is something I dread,
I hover site to site in some hidden type of shame,
Point my finger at others and give them the blame.

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Venetia Crasta May 16, 2011 at 8:41 PM Mist, Your poems make me laugh. Good sense of humour you got there... Regards Venetia.

Dr.Ram Mehta May 16, 2011 at 5:53 PM Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, M.M.

Carol Sunshine Brown May 16, 2011 at 1:13 PM Congratulations on your featured write this week M.M. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 15, 2011 at 5:57 PM Congrats mourning mist on your featured poem this week on P.S. .. a great one to share with us all with luv..

Zzzzz Zzzzz May 12, 2011 at 4:01 AM I was 45 once...and I was once 16! Those birthdays came and went a long time ago! Nice little write.

Gwendolen Song May 11, 2011 at 2:45 AM Being a grownup isn't so bad...your age is in your mind anyways... Creative title. Best to you, Gwendolen

Kash Poet May 10, 2011 at 9:34 PM So you are 45?:)

Mourning Mist May 10, 2011 at 8:23 PM young at heart and immature is two totally different things

Andrea Dietrich May 10, 2011 at 7:31 PM this is kind of sad, Mourning. Is that a pen name by the way? It's cool. I am 55 but really 18 but simply for the reason that I am very young at heart!!