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I Am 45 But Really 16

I may be 45 but I act like I am sixteen instead, I never take responsibility it is something I dread, I hover site to site in some hidden type of shame, Point my finger at others and give them the blame.

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Venetia Crasta

Date: 5/16/2011 8:41:00 PM

Mist, Your poems make me laugh. Good sense of humour you got there... Regards Venetia.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/16/2011 5:53:00 PM

Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, M.M.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/16/2011 1:13:00 PM

Congratulations on your featured write this week M.M. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/15/2011 5:57:00 PM

Congrats mourning mist on your featured poem this week on P.S. .. a great one to share with us all with luv..

Zzzzz Zzzzz

Date: 5/12/2011 4:01:00 AM

I was 45 once...and I was once 16! Those birthdays came and went a long time ago! Nice little write.

Gwendolen Song

Date: 5/11/2011 2:45:00 AM

Being a grownup isn't so bad...your age is in your mind anyways... Creative title. Best to you, Gwendolen

Kash Poet

Date: 5/10/2011 9:34:00 PM

So you are 45?:)

Mourning Mist

Date: 5/10/2011 8:23:00 PM

young at heart and immature is two totally different things

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/10/2011 7:31:00 PM

this is kind of sad, Mourning. Is that a pen name by the way? It's cool. I am 55 but really 18 but simply for the reason that I am very young at heart!!