I Am

I am every dark thought passing through your mind I am every minute's waste on a broken watch's clock I am every pin prick every sting or throb of pain I am the shadows of your heart you sought to hide I am the past and the present time's mistake

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/2/2012 5:35:00 PM

A powerful and strong poem Victoria.Have a lovely weekend with alot of sunshine. - oxox Anne-Lise

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/28/2011 9:00:00 AM

As I am enjoying reading your very creative writing today I would like to thank you for sharing it with us Victoria. Hoping you have a very inspiration filled day with loads of joy and laughter. Love, Carol

Venetia Crasta

Date: 7/28/2011 6:50:00 AM

very profound

Jack Ross Jr.

Date: 7/27/2011 7:35:00 PM

Very nice....bit sad though....depends on ones perspective I suppose.....God bless...old Jack

Steven Cooke

Date: 7/27/2011 5:43:00 PM

well put together i like this, thought provoking.