Victoria Mcintyre Poet Free verse

I Am

I am
every dark thought 
passing through your mind

I am 
every minute's waste
on a broken watch's clock

I am
every pin prick
every sting or throb of pain

I am
the shadows of your heart
you sought to hide

I am
the past and the present
time's mistake

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Anne-Lise Andresen March 2, 2012 at 5:35 PM A powerful and strong poem Victoria.Have a lovely weekend with alot of sunshine. - oxox Anne-Lise

Carol Sunshine Brown July 28, 2011 at 9:00 AM As I am enjoying reading your very creative writing today I would like to thank you for sharing it with us Victoria. Hoping you have a very inspiration filled day with loads of joy and laughter. Love, Carol

Venetia Crasta July 28, 2011 at 6:50 AM very profound

Jack Ross Jr. July 27, 2011 at 7:35 PM Very nice....bit sad though....depends on ones perspective I suppose.....God bless...old Jack

Steven Cooke July 27, 2011 at 5:43 PM well put together i like this, thought provoking.