I Am

This is a poem by my 9 year old son Dylan. I am a smart kid and a techno geek I wonder how far space goes on I hear a dinosaur roar I see my dog that passed away I want to see my grandpa I am a smart kid and a techno geek I pretend to have one million dollars I feel my dad hugging me I touch my mom's brownies I worry about my parents I cry when summer's over I am a smart kid and a techno geek I understand that my dad has to be deployed I say aliens exist I dream that I'm being attacked by a sea serpent I try to make my life the best I hope my brother has a good education I am a smart kid and a techno geek.

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Beata Agustin

Date: 10/22/2024 6:38:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/23/2016 9:01:00 PM

thank you for sharing your poem, your son did well. LINDA

Skat A

Date: 1/1/2016 12:59:00 PM

RANDY, pleasure to read :) HAVE YOURSELF A HAPPY January 1st. ...... SKAT

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 9/21/2009 5:26:00 AM

This is an excellent poem. I can tell from the tone you're having a great time. I like the refrain of being a techno geek. My son was that way too. The theme is consistent. Welcome to poetrysoup. Arigato and Gambatte! ~Joseph

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/17/2009 12:24:00 PM

Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry Randy. Love, Carol

Nadia Shahwan

Date: 9/17/2009 6:02:00 AM

Beautiful poetry. May God bless your talented child; he portrayed his fervent dreams. Pls continue to encourage him to compose more poetry all the time. Wishing you all the best. I do appreciate your comment over my choka poem-Unique Visit. Thank you.