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I AM

Written: April 18, 2025, for contest by Useeking Seeker Suggested line of inquiry: “As God’s spark ensouling organic form, I am that presence which cannot be named, felt within as a magnetic bliss storm, divine pulsation that cannot be tamed, gentled by His touch, within body framed. I am that which transcends both space and time. I am love and light, causing heart to chime.” ****************** I'm a susurrus with a dawn-lit smile, In thanatopsis ballet of storm, yell sporadic. Boundless, such is the ocean, tied by its magic, In seraphic settings, I grasp how to guile. As fire blazes within an obsidian hearth, Stars convey stories of light and shadow. Where echoes fear to tread, silence is shallow, Every morning, a raw beginning will appear. In the earth's fabric, I breathe and bloom, Beyond boundaries, lucid dreams may fly. A sprawling cosmos of light and dark can pry I am still grounded in this airy, earthy room. Time flows such as water across my veins. The universe hums a symphonic tune. From bright elixir to moonlit dune— During each ebb and flow, that remains. "God's spark ignited by our mute breath." Some unseen cosmic link, firm and profound. A magnetic fascination storm swirls around. A gentle whisper of love's boundless strength. Within my soul, divine pulsation rings. Subdued by a miasma of seraphic grace. Eclipsing shadows that time cannot erase. Through hallowed silence, my spirit sings. Infinite ties extend across physical chains. I am molded by the requiem of endless caress. Crafted in a symbol of light to softly bless. While the grasp of truth continues to reign. Into vast areas where humans dare not tread. My heart swirls in synergy with stars above — God's glory weaves across boundless love— Creating an eternal chorus in mercy embed.

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Date: 4/24/2025 4:45:00 AM
Back to your lovely poem with Congratulations, dear friend.
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Date: 4/22/2025 11:27:00 AM
Dear dr sotto, what a profound and concise take on the line of enquiry, i love your use of poetic techniques and how youv mentioned being grounded linked to the divine vibrations of the almighty so eloquently here! Especially love the lines "I am molded by the requiem of endless caress. Crafted in a symbol of light to softly bless. While the grasp of truth continues to reign." deeply meaningful and soulful write this is! Pleasure reading your poem! Sending you light always! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 4/22/2025 10:38:00 AM
Back with heartiest congratulations, dear poet on your win in Unseeking Seeker`s poetry contest with a masterly poem revealing a superb diction, choosy rhymes and a flowing rhythm. Wish the light of divine blessings ever brighten your path.
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Date: 4/21/2025 9:37:00 PM
Love your concluding stanza. Shows your values and priorities. "Within my soul, divine pulsation rings. Subdued by a miasma of seraphic grace. Eclipsing shadows that time cannot erase. Through hallowed silence, my spirit sings." Another wonderful stanza. You deal with life's challenges while maintaining faith. I feel that this is the song of a contented soul. You abide in God's protection and love and enjoy bliss. Lovely poem.
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Date: 4/21/2025 4:41:00 AM
SP, your description makes a pleasant and impassioned case for the spirit. For those who believe, it will be a very encouraging read. Will we ever understand where all we are a part of comes from?
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Date: 4/18/2025 2:31:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your lovely "I AM" write. Great Ending... "Good Luck" Have a great/blessed Easter Day........
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