I Am

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Sensing lack, aliveness remiss Let's look into this together Why heart's joy ego does smother What do we feel, what do we miss Regrets of past, fear of morrow This then the cause of our sorrow In staid silence, nothing’s amiss Poised in stillness within each storm Divine magnetism pervades form As renews bliss, God's sublime kiss We feel within, silent thunder Joy rising from deep down under Soul exclaims, I Am, I Am this! Being simply, God's living light As renews within, bliss delight Sensing lack, aliveness remiss What do we feel, what do we miss In staid silence, nothing’s amiss As renews bliss, God's sublime kiss Soul exclaims, I Am, I Am this! 24-November-2022 Constanza poetry form (invented by Connie Marcum Wong)

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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/24/2022 5:38:00 AM

We can never forget Connie. Your poetry is sublime.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 11/24/2022 7:09:00 AM

Thanks Victor. I got to know of this poetry form after Connie crossed over. A superb form, deserves recognition input seems PS admin is hesitant for reasons best known to them.