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I Am

I am refreshing as a cool summer breeze that blows down from the mountains. I am a great childhood memory as grandma's ice tea and buttered toast. I am good times_sunny days at the beach with the finest of friends; a fun day of running through thick grassy fields with bare feet. I am an unforgettable first love_strong emotions_ tingles and smiles, and the sweet array of the light touch of shy lips; that special first kiss. I am tasteful romance and fine dining, candlelight dinner for two served with vintage wine on a private yacht named "Paradise". I am... Natures' Best! I am the worst feeling you can imagine_ hot scorching winds against virgin skin, bad dreams that do not end. I am regrettable as the slip of the tongue_ words spoken in anger that you can never take back. I am the pains of two days of hard labor without the joys of childbirth. I am the dread of lost jobs, unpaid bills, empty wallets, and negative $5.00 in the bank. I am illness, that sick feeling deep down in the pit of your guts developed from worry and anxiety. I am fear, remorse, and the devastation of searching for a missing child; yet, finding only shreds of clothing. I am what we have come to know as "Hades on earth". I am Nature's Unrest! 06-09-2019 Contest: Go Deep Within An Emotions Poetry Contest Sponsor: Sheri Fresonke Harper

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Date: 7/27/2019 6:48:00 PM
Congratulations Niyna for your honorable mention placement in the contest. There were so many fine poems entered. I was impressed with your repetition of I am making a concrete appearance in specific experience shown as a force of nature.
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Niyna Desangre
Date: 7/28/2019 4:36:00 PM
WoW! Honorable Mention!!! I feel pretty... so very pretty _ happy and gay!!! La la Laa La La This has truly made my day... Thanks. Wonderful Day to You!
Date: 7/7/2019 1:44:00 AM
Oh wow! This is a marvelous poem. Love the contrast in this verse. Amazing job!
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Niyna Desangre
Date: 7/7/2019 9:09:00 AM
Yes! This describes the pros and cons of the inner self. My first writing and the most meaningful. My inner mirror! Gratefully, ~~~Niyna
Date: 6/10/2019 12:01:00 AM
Denise, this is a powerful poem. "I am the pains of two days of hard labor without the joys of childbirth. I am the dread of lost jobs, unpaid bills, empty wallets and negative $5.00 in the bank. " Wow! You have such empathy! Wonderful poem.
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Niyna Desangre
Date: 6/11/2019 6:37:00 AM
Thank you for your feedback. I hope my experiences within this group help me grow in expressionism.

Book: Shattered Sighs