I Am

I am refreshing as a cool summer breeze that blows down from the mountains. 
I am a great childhood memory as grandma's ice tea and buttered toast. 
I am good times_sunny days at the beach with the finest of friends; a fun day of running through thick grassy fields with bare feet. 
I am an unforgettable first love_strong emotions_ tingles and smiles, and the sweet array of the light touch of shy lips; that special first kiss. 
I am tasteful romance and fine dining, candlelight dinner for two served with vintage wine on a private yacht named "Paradise". 
I am... Natures' Best! 

I am the worst feeling you can imagine_ hot scorching winds against virgin skin, bad dreams that do not end. 
I am regrettable as the slip of the tongue_ words spoken in anger that you can never take back. 
I am the pains of two days of hard labor without the joys of childbirth. 
I am the dread of lost jobs, unpaid bills, empty wallets, and negative $5.00 in the bank. 
I am illness, that sick feeling deep down in the pit of your guts developed from worry and anxiety. 
I am fear, remorse, and the devastation of searching for a missing child; yet, finding only shreds of clothing. 
I am what we have come to know as "Hades on earth". 
I am Nature's Unrest! 

06-09-2019
Contest: Go Deep Within An Emotions Poetry Contest
Sponsor:  Sheri Fresonke Harper
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Harper Avatar
July 27, 2019 at 6:48 PM
Congratulations Niyna for your honorable mention placement in the contest. There were so many fine poems entered. I was impressed with your repetition of I am making a concrete appearance in specific experience shown as a force of nature.
Desangre Avatar
July 28, 2019 at 4:36 PM
WoW! Honorable Mention!!! I feel pretty... so very pretty _ happy and gay!!! La la Laa La La This has truly made my day... Thanks. Wonderful Day to You!
Breidenthal Avatar
July 7, 2019 at 1:44 AM
Oh wow! This is a marvelous poem. Love the contrast in this verse. Amazing job!
Desangre Avatar
July 7, 2019 at 9:09 AM
Yes! This describes the pros and cons of the inner self. My first writing and the most meaningful. My inner mirror! Gratefully, ~~~Niyna
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June 10, 2019 at 12:01 AM
Denise, this is a powerful poem. "I am the pains of two days of hard labor without the joys of childbirth. I am the dread of lost jobs, unpaid bills, empty wallets and negative $5.00 in the bank. " Wow! You have such empathy! Wonderful poem.
Desangre Avatar
June 11, 2019 at 6:37 AM
Thank you for your feedback. I hope my experiences within this group help me grow in expressionism.
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