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I Always Loved You, For Maria

To my dear daughter... I loved you, in your sweet Mary Janes. In all our travels that were fine and plane. You cannot remember how I pulled your hair. Those braids,so tangled yet shiny and brunette fair. You won’t have the pride, I did. Watching you from the audience at Fairmont, you on stage, You were just a kid! Nor, how I hurt inside, when children called you terrible names. Those brats with no hearts and no shame! The fear I felt, when your face was split. I stood outside the hospital, crying salty tears, that stung and bit. And oh, the Christmases, when I could not provide you the best! You went without plenty, and yet you turned out to be a far more than cut above all the rest! You told me once, when I was hopeless and crying. That God was always with us, to keep on trusting Him and smiling. Each summer, without you, I was so lost. You flew to Chicago to be with your grandparents, Life without you, seemed hardly worth the cost! My pride in you, like a colored sunset that never ends. Or perhaps a gorgeous rainbow and it’s colorful, shiny trends! You grew to be one glorious soul! Your contributions to this society simply grow and glows! As a wife, you are unsurpassed! Thank you for my grandson, Edward, I shall call him, “outstanding”and like his Mom, cannot be outclassed. My life, I see, comes to its close. Thus, I leave you my poetry, I hope some with bless you, like the dew on a summer rose. That is my everlasting gift to you. Just simple words and phrases, that when I am gone, sing to you forever! That, my daughter, I will love you, is my lifelong treasure! Love, Mommy 1-26-2022

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Date: 2/15/2022 6:29:00 AM
A true poem from the heart and so wonderful, warm and beautiful.
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Date: 2/2/2022 3:27:00 PM
Your pride shines here. Wonderful tribute
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 2/3/2022 2:43:00 PM
Andrea, yes, I agree. I could write a tribute to her each day. Such...are her qualities.....endless! Thank you...Pangie xxoo
Date: 1/27/2022 10:49:00 PM
Wow, powerful dedication Pangie, love the poetry.
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 1/28/2022 10:23:00 AM
Bless you, Harry It’s quite a truthful poem. Panagiota xx
Date: 1/27/2022 8:55:00 AM
A great tribute, Panagi, for your daughter. Bless you with a new year of blessings. Hugs Eve
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 1/27/2022 10:11:00 AM
Dearest Eve. Could never pen enough about all her qualities. She makes a great nurse)))) I wish you the best, this year. Your tributte to me was outstanding and what a friend you are. Thank you. Panagiota
Date: 1/27/2022 8:19:00 AM
Panagiota, 'my everlasting gift to you ~~ my daughter, I will love you, my lifelong treasure!' Now ours to share in a life that warranted it. Simply marvelous poetry! -Richard
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 1/27/2022 9:58:00 AM
Hey Richard! Great to hear from you. Glad those of you who responded ...,,did! I honestly am hurt by friends here who tossed me overboard. But family counts! Those who I thought were friends, crushed me. Don’t break your leg, Richard! I could not have shown myself or my soul more. I see the type poetry is liked here, Certainly, nothing deep.honest or beautiful.Is it me? I just feel I waste my time? I know you are a soul man Panagioita Thank you. Maria pens under the name, Elena Eagle.
Date: 1/26/2022 11:58:00 PM
A beautiful tribute to Maria Pangie and she deserves it, you couldn't wish for a more precious gift. Tom
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Date: 1/27/2022 10:04:00 AM
Tom, friend, Maria is a gift.she has not read the responses yet. AM still here. Need to go home this Weekend. Maria needs a rest... Pangie
Date: 1/26/2022 7:54:00 PM
Maria, Maria Maria. I've just met a girl named Maria... Much, much better than the one in the movie... YOUR Maria: A strong woman, taking care of her child and her Mom, all in a day's stride. Maria! Wonderful tribute, Pangie! Blessings and Healing, Gershon
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 1/27/2022 9:37:00 AM
I will not take issue with you. She’s so awesome, not just to me...,to everyone...... Be well! Pangie xoxo
Date: 1/26/2022 4:38:00 PM
I have often said, one cannot hide in poetry. Out in front with all our worth. Even those who are insincere and write, are only fooling themselves...one cannot hide in poetry, as truth needs no acclamation but its presence. Here, in this fine work of yours, the beauty and sincerity of your life's person shines, a tender compassionate light, for the world to see...and, hopefully, those with eyes and ears open will hearken and emulate for its ongoing message of love and devotion to our troubled world, forever seeking to enlighten and uplift. I believe your works will be cherished by Maria for always. Great writing. Got a little tearful reading this one – a long admirer of your excellence. Hang in there. Blessings my friend, Joe and Ila.
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