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Between us there is only place for tears and sighs I’m right you wrong I can’t stand that I can’t stand this I’m the queen I'm superior I'm the star I’m the sun I'm perfect I'm better I want I need I’m it I.... I.... I... All the sudden our world is full of "i"s The u in us is now just two disjointed "i"s All is fading, so is it worth it to keep the ties When the love is long gone from each other eyes I’m jealous of the us who used to touch the skies Flying free, careless and happy like butterflies Just two souls that didn’t care about the why's Focusing on creating a world free of lies. Now all the beauty is replaced by hidden guise. That pride and prejudgments have jeopardize. The us that once Inspired other’s envies, now agonize and we’ve just became two specimens that others analyze. I hate the "i" that refuses to understand the ultimate demise the “I” that keeps hoping and begging for a last reprise Blinded by a love that will no longer compromise too afraid to see IT was something “I” fictionalize I loathe the stubborn “i” that keeps you paralyze The biases that push you to always scrutinize The purest soul tendered with no disguise The “i” in you that no longer sympathize I’m afraid of the "i” who’s ready to finalize Of all the voices that pushes me to soliloquize Screaming, yelling, and telling me to finally realize It was just make believe, one soul “i” over romanticize No need playing the blame games or trying to ostracize There’s always later, maybe time will help it stabilize There is always a lifetime to try until tomorrow dies Until there is no time and nothing else to revitalize You.... You.... You... You’re it You need You want You’re better You’re perfect You’re the sun You’re the star You’re superior You’re the queen You can’t stand this You can’t stand that You’re right I’m wrong Does it matter if at the end we are saying our goodbyes.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 6/12/2016 11:07:00 PM
nice list, awesome first poem. linda
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Date: 6/8/2016 12:33:00 PM
- Poetry: Music in words .... rhythmic expression of emotion, like the nectar of the bee, you are sharing here with us Nahomie :) - Welcome to Poetry Soup :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Nahomie Julien
Date: 7/14/2016 9:50:00 AM
ThanK you
Date: 6/5/2016 10:26:00 PM
ENJOYED YOUR LIST, NAHOMIE,,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**
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