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I Admit

So I sat back {for once} denouncing another day Occupied composing the profound things I would say Whilst waiting patiently for emotion to go away Once again uninvited & the cause of the delay Truth is I’m tongue tied and speechless even silent Suddenly aware of how words too can be violent A casual comment the cause of this very coincident Leaves me vulnerable honest exposed openly reticent So simply look me in the eye " it’s all that this will take if you own up and admit it " I will - it wasn’t all fake we both can however agree " it was a momentous mistake one that rules as reminder to remember not to remake..

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Date: 1/25/2025 4:03:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Have a blessed New Year.
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Date: 1/20/2016 8:15:00 PM
FATE, I really enjoyed this poem thanks for sharing **SKAT**
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