I Admit
I admit….
(Sicilian Quintain Form)
It'd be tough to accept; still, I'll confess;
as relation can't build on lies; can't cheat;
No, from you I'd not like it to suppress,
Admit I love him a lot. Never treat
as refusal; don't like you to depress.
~x~x~
We quit
(Spanish Quintain Form)
I am so happy you admit
Your love for him; yes, I liked you;
Need time, but I'll accept what's true.
It's good, we're avoiding a split,
with ugly words, before the quit.
~x~x~
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