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I Admit

I admit…. (Sicilian Quintain Form) It'd be tough to accept; still, I'll confess; as relation can't build on lies; can't cheat; No, from you I'd not like it to suppress, Admit I love him a lot. Never treat as refusal; don't like you to depress. ~x~x~ We quit (Spanish Quintain Form) I am so happy you admit Your love for him; yes, I liked you; Need time, but I'll accept what's true. It's good, we're avoiding a split, with ugly words, before the quit. ~x~x~

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Date: 2/10/2020 12:11:00 AM
I admit.. We quit.. in two different form.. Beautifully penned.. Thanks for sharing..
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Pratap Roy
Date: 2/10/2020 12:35:00 AM
Thank you Jenish for your appreciation. God bless you.

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