I Admire Her No Secret

She had to have been heaven sent and it was evident
By her beauty and her temperament
So beautiful
Her very essence could make you emotional
And so graceful
The stroke of her cuticle could turn the harshest heart playful
So natural
That to her casual
Is basically relaxing 
In his and her matching flip flops romancing
subcosciously dancing
pirouetting 
Over obstacles 
Turning their damaging effects comical
So tender
Theres not a day with her I cant remember 
Like cold nights in november
hearts warmth melted away the winter
So basic
When she throws fits I apply logic
And deal with it since those lips movements
turn my mentals fluid
So amazing
That while the rest of the world is raging
We in the tub bathing
navigating each others creations
without relations
just playin

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 10/19/2014 2:21:00 AM
I definitely love this poem shantez.it really touches me deep inside.especially when I no u talking about ur love.And we both no who she is.I love it!
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Date: 6/19/2012 12:51:00 PM
What a beautiful day and what wonderful poetry I am enjoying reading today. Glad I came across this poem of yours and read it Shantez. Please keep posting so all can enjoy. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/18/2012 2:56:00 PM
Love it!!!
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