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I accidentally let one loose

I accidentally let one loose while standing by a fire; marshmallows burst in my wind; the flames grew ever higher; Jan fell bank into the cooler, as ice poured down her collar; Mikey wailed, just three years old, and stomped his feet and hollard; the loons on the lake stopped their song, as the frogs all gasped for air; the fireflies fell, one by one, as the fish ate up their share; the dragonflies rolled their eyes and flew away to the moon, as the cinders from the campfire rose and yet spelled out their doom. july 11 2018

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Date: 7/23/2018 2:59:00 AM
Certainly one way of attracting accidental attraction. Congratulations on your win and many odourless wishes, Kai
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Date: 7/23/2018 12:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Well done!
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Date: 7/22/2018 12:24:00 PM
Oh, Jack, Hahahah so very clever indeed! Still laughing! Congratulations on your awesome win! Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/22/2018 7:25:00 AM
That was one powerful fart Jack lol, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/22/2018 6:26:00 AM
Jack, C0ngratulations on your placement in my contest...A very fun read...Charlie
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