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In words I paint myself on the canvas of the world, and patiently wait for the day I'm completed. Blasphemers will burn me, and light will turn black... "No monster walked the Earth," they will weep and tremble... No! It will have been... I... I will have been reneged redemption.

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Skat A

Date: 11/19/2013 11:12:00 PM

Ruxandra, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT

Victoria Anderson-Throop

Date: 11/19/2013 3:59:00 PM

I especially like the first two lines.... you show the spirit of a powerful woman.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/19/2013 11:05:00 AM

- Welcome to P-Soup, Ruxandra! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more.... another day :) - oxox / /Anne-Lise :)

Johnny Rhinem

Date: 11/19/2013 10:40:00 AM

† If Mercy Has His Way Which Is Love Then, Darkness Shall Melt Away While Light Forms Her Wings Anew ˜ Tears Carved The Stone Of Time And Angels, Wept To Cry ? I Kept Searching For Dark Traces Upon My Palms But, Broken Life's Line Branched Out At Many Places; North, West, With A Dip In Slight, Towards His South ˜ Welcome To Her Loving PoetrySoup And Dig The Poe ˜ Happy Holidays ˜ Love John