Emily Kroeger Poet Free verse

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I cry so silently, my heart beats like it is not there.
I wish I could wash away and disappear like I was never here. 
I want to vanish like there was never someone here.


Is there any hope? 
Is there any time?
My life is coming to an end and I will wash away in fear.


I cry so silently, my heart beats like it is not there.
I wish I could wash away and disappear like I was never here.
I want to vanish like there was never someone here.


not finishid .

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Des Juan Richardson May 27, 2009 at 9:01 PM So sad and full and pain. I love the flow. Will you finish it or should it be finished at all? I like it the way it is. ~Des Juan

Jessica K May 24, 2009 at 8:27 PM Awww so sad chicka.....

Jay Loveless May 7, 2009 at 8:13 AM this could be lyrics....i cant wait to see the emd result

Daver Austin May 1, 2009 at 12:52 PM Kind of disjointed, but there is a unique quality about your poetry I REALLY like. I don't see where the piece needs finishing. Love, daver

John Loving Iii April 28, 2009 at 1:19 PM sooner orlatter you have to finish something.

Anna-Marie Docherty April 27, 2009 at 11:48 AM cries out to know if there is more to life or whether it is indeed worth its trials, a few tweaks here and there as you finish this and I'm sure you will be proud! Kindest thoughts, and thanks for your commenting on my writes, Anna-Marie.

Nadia Shahwan April 26, 2009 at 10:24 AM Beautiful poem.

Julie Loveless April 25, 2009 at 8:07 PM wow i love this. I feel like this to emers!