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I cry so silently, my heart beats like it is not there. I wish I could wash away and disappear like I was never here. I want to vanish like there was never someone here. Is there any hope? Is there any time? My life is coming to an end and I will wash away in fear. I cry so silently, my heart beats like it is not there. I wish I could wash away and disappear like I was never here. I want to vanish like there was never someone here. not finishid .

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Des Juan Richardson

Date: 5/27/2009 9:01:00 PM

So sad and full and pain. I love the flow. Will you finish it or should it be finished at all? I like it the way it is. ~Des Juan

Jessica K

Date: 5/24/2009 8:27:00 PM

Awww so sad chicka.....

Jay Loveless

Date: 5/7/2009 8:13:00 AM

this could be lyrics....i cant wait to see the emd result

Daver Austin

Date: 5/1/2009 12:52:00 PM

Kind of disjointed, but there is a unique quality about your poetry I REALLY like. I don't see where the piece needs finishing. Love, daver

John Loving Iii

Date: 4/28/2009 1:19:00 PM

sooner orlatter you have to finish something.

Anna-Marie Docherty

Date: 4/27/2009 11:48:00 AM

cries out to know if there is more to life or whether it is indeed worth its trials, a few tweaks here and there as you finish this and I'm sure you will be proud! Kindest thoughts, and thanks for your commenting on my writes, Anna-Marie.

Nadia Shahwan

Date: 4/26/2009 10:24:00 AM

Beautiful poem.

Julie Loveless

Date: 4/25/2009 8:07:00 PM

wow i love this. I feel like this to emers!