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*Image of Compasses by Pixabay. I I layeth within walled morals of enduring convictions to coexist and be, A delicate breath of precious life to self-assess being, Serendipitously, I ascend in wonderment, fully aware, Into the dawn, I hoped to perceive being ordinaire, Challenges made the zest of life be gains, Charms ardor of will, fortitude, justifies presence, Fairly placed in the room of amassed commonality, Memorable loves, and losses, that made me, Well measured, oft maintained, visions persist, I layeth within walled morals of enduring convictions to coexist and be. 2019 September 27 *2nd Place* Story of my life in ten lines ~~Silent One: Judged 2019 October 04

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Date: 10/6/2019 12:01:00 PM
- Congratulations on your 2nd place in the contest, William :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Hilo Poet
Date: 10/6/2019 12:03:00 PM
Thanks! ~ Aloha always William
Date: 10/4/2019 4:09:00 PM
some great lines here.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 10/4/2019 4:14:00 PM
Thanks! ~ Aloha always William

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