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Hypocritical Humanity

Hypocritical, unethical, selfish, and unlearned Under developed use of our overstated minds Militant masochists tend to rule this world Antagonistic especially towards our own people Narcissistic insight concerning the global scale Intelligence is wasted instead of being shared Tragedy encompasses us forever the witch hunt Yesterday's life lessons are learned nowhere 11/12/17 Written for contest: "Humanity/Acrostic" Won 3rd Place in Contest Results

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Date: 11/25/2017 7:57:00 AM
Insightful and thought-provoking, Brian! I see some parallels in your approach to that of my more politically-slanted poems. Congrats on your win! Regards, John.
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Brian Davey
Date: 11/25/2017 12:46:00 PM
One should not waste his life away without thought, I am going to search those poems of yours out now to read through them my friend
Date: 11/18/2017 11:43:00 AM
Thanks so much for this excellent entry, congrats on a fine winning placement!
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Brian Davey
Date: 11/18/2017 12:15:00 PM
Thank you for your appreciation and for running a great contest
Date: 11/18/2017 4:17:00 AM
Powerfully written and thoughtful. Congratulations on your fine win, Brian - blessings to you, friend, and keep on writing! :-)
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Brian Davey
Date: 11/18/2017 9:09:00 AM
Thanks again Gregory filo all of your support and encouragement. Also hit poem for this contest was excellent my friend
Date: 11/13/2017 6:15:00 AM
Sadly true, Brian, well written:)
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Brian Davey
Date: 11/13/2017 11:25:00 AM
Yes very sad indeed, thanks Jo
Date: 11/12/2017 6:48:00 PM
powerfully penned Brian and I especially like that final line, a great entry for the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Brian Davey
Date: 11/12/2017 6:50:00 PM
Thanks Jan much appreciated

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