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Hypocrites

White clothes wear for virtue's candidates to appear yet pitch-black their souls stay!*








© Demetrios Trifiatis
     24 August 2017

* Just back for today!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Roper Avatar
September 8, 2017 at 9:16 AM
Well said, Demetrios, to many of them around ~`*
Daniel Avatar
August 30, 2017 at 6:55 AM
That's the worst, I feel, hiding beneath goodie goodie looks, well said, brother :)
Bateman Avatar
August 25, 2017 at 4:35 PM
Hallo Herr Professor!! Demetrios, Auch dieses Gedicht ist ganz Ausgezeichnet!! How true, oh so true, pitch-black be the lot of their "souls stay." Methinks my good friend, that you are truly a great poet . . . and you know it!! "Hypocrites" through and through be they!! Besten Gruess und Schoenes Wochenende!! Gary
Sands Avatar
August 24, 2017 at 7:44 AM
Welcome back Demetrios. A strong message of truth here !
Trifiatis Avatar
August 24, 2017 at 7:49 AM
I am back just for the day to stand next to the ones that are constantly attacked! Thank you dearest, Heidi. I do value your visit and comment!
Pandit Avatar
August 24, 2017 at 7:01 AM
Another line full of wisdom--thanks Demetrios!
Trifiatis Avatar
August 24, 2017 at 7:50 AM
It is me who thank you for your kindness my friend, Vijay! God bless you!
One Avatar
August 24, 2017 at 5:25 AM
A hypocrite is more dangerous than a dishonest man. A dishonest man deceives and cheats, and a hypocrite betrays and swindles... Dr T.P.Chia. Welcome back my friend.. Hope all is well with you..
Trifiatis Avatar
August 24, 2017 at 7:52 AM
Thank you very much for your illuminating comment my friend, Silent One! Unfortunately those men are multiplied as time progresses! God bless you!
Muideen Avatar
August 24, 2017 at 3:57 AM
I am glad that you're back, sir. Excellent post.
Trifiatis Avatar
August 24, 2017 at 7:54 AM
Thank you so much my friend, Afolabi! I am back just for today! I wish I could be here every day and confront those Hypocrites and make them understand that talented people should not try to destroy other poets but to help them! God bless you my friend!
Andresen Avatar
August 24, 2017 at 3:52 AM
- Their actions are immoral, cowardly and cruel - It's about people who have miles in the distance between life and learning -Excellent written, my dear friend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Trifiatis Avatar
August 24, 2017 at 7:57 AM
Very true my friend, Anne-Lise, that is why I came back today to stand shoulder to shoulder with our friends who are unjustly attacked! These people have to understand that they will not become better poets if they become worse people! God forgive them. I pray they see the light my friend. Thank you for your precious visit! Hugs!
Manassian Avatar
August 24, 2017 at 3:32 AM
:( It is a sorry state of things, indeed.
Trifiatis Avatar
August 24, 2017 at 8:01 AM
Yes, it is my dearest, Eileen and it seems to get worst as talentless people try to built a reputation of a good poet by destroying the reputation of talented people! Hope they will understand that only by becoming good people can improve as poets! Thank you! Filakia!
Williams Avatar
August 24, 2017 at 1:25 AM
Demetrios my dearest friend, how good to see you again. This is indeed a very profound Monoku, and sums up so well in such a few words what the word Hypocrite stands for. The camouflage always slips though, no matter how well it is disguised.....Maria xxx
Trifiatis Avatar
August 24, 2017 at 8:07 AM
Good to see you too dearest, Maria! Your visit is an act of support to those good people who fall victims to the inconsiderate men and women whose only ambition is to be first no matter what the moral cost! Hope they will realize their mistake and try to rectify the wrong doings they have committed! Thank you so much! God bless you! XXX
Tor Avatar
August 24, 2017 at 12:56 AM
Yes Demetrios so true! Thank you for posting and wonderful that your back for today...
Tor Avatar
August 25, 2017 at 4:25 PM
you are.
Trifiatis Avatar
August 24, 2017 at 8:08 AM
Good people like you dear, Michael deserve good friends. Let us hope that I am one good friend of you! God bless you!
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