Hypocrisy

I know a man
          who worries about his life.
A man who has two children,
      a house and a beautiful wife.

We hide our thoughts in laughter
   as we have done all these years.
It’s only when we’re alone
                we cry crocodile tears.

So if someone ever tells you
    that you’re better off than him,
you had better start treading water
       lest you be the next victim.
 
              

             Written: 1992
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Trestrail Avatar
May 28, 2024 at 4:57 AM
Not sure I follow the last verse but that’s poetry for ya. Interpretation is everything.
Poteet Avatar
January 13, 2022 at 7:57 PM
Enjoyed your thoughts here, Craig, it sheds light on how our words should match the actions we practice.
Calasibetta Avatar
January 13, 2022 at 1:36 PM
Congratulations on your win Craig! Unfortunate is the human condition to hide from truth…..great write! :)Paulette
Alex Avatar
January 13, 2022 at 6:20 AM
Great poem. With an advise and warning too. Congratulations!
Lawless Avatar
January 8, 2022 at 5:51 AM
So true Craig....we will tell others everything....but the truth.
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