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Hypnotic Poisons Christmas Revenge

She well knew his place of abode, And swirled inside, a vengeful tornado, A celestial radiance had encompassed their love, And then he disappeared on Christmas Eve, Without a word! Her heart had turned to stone, her eyes Flashed around for something to write with, Nothing, so cut her finger deeply Her blood flowed freely As would, a wounded bird. Wrote on the wall in blood, That all his future loves, would leave Him with a broken heart, at Love’s Station Of Departure, for she, Hypnotic Poison vowed That he alike be cursed. He had mesmerized and betrayed her, His heartless, unfeeling, selfish soul, On a windy, stormy Christmas Eve turned Her heart to stone and blood to poison, That is what the village said, And what I heard! This poem is pure fiction and the title of the poem is of a perfume. The story is in actual fact the ending of some horror movie, whilst browsing through Netflix to find a movie we wanted to see.

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Date: 1/19/2021 1:29:00 AM
All pulled together nicely to make a great story...was looking for more. Enjoyed.
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Date: 12/23/2020 2:21:00 PM
Dark and mysterious Jennifer, hell has no fury like a woman scorned... With her heart turned to stone and her blood to poison, nothing could stop her evil, malicious intention. A fantastic write Jennifer. Merry Christmas friend. Hugs, Belle
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 1/1/2021 10:32:00 AM
I'm glad you enjoy dark and mysterious, Hell has no fury like a woman scorned, and especially on Christmas, she meant business! Happy New Year Dear Friend and may all your wishes come true in 2021. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 12/20/2020 10:51:00 PM
Yes my wife's favourite perfume. Such strength of subject matter, a creation from a pen, a mind, that oozes talent.. Have yourself and family a safe and happy festive season.
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Date: 12/22/2020 5:23:00 AM
Harry, you are awesome, your poems, your comments are amazing. You are such a respected and much loved and appreciated poet on this site. Thank you for your beautiful comment, seems my daughter in law and your wife have similar and excellent taste. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 12/18/2020 7:16:00 PM
My dear poetry sister, your fantastic pen is gifted with a dark imagination that enthralls my imagination so perfectly. Captivating and creative, Jennifer! I especially loved; "Her heart to stone and blood to poison" - such potent ink, my inspiring friend. Hugs and warmest Christmas wishes for you and yours.. ~Susan
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 12/22/2020 5:15:00 AM
Hi Susan, what beautiful comments you send to us all, I often read your other comments and they are always so eloquent an d powerful - you are just an amazing poetess! Thank-you so much for an awesome comment - I don't often write dark but sometimes a word or a name or a place will suit fearful! I hope that you and your family have a peaceful, blessed Christmas - love and hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 12/16/2020 3:44:00 PM
hmmm, sounds like the kinds of movies I have been seeing lately. What was it called? I really like this. Very poetic.
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 12/17/2020 8:04:00 AM
Unfortunately it was the tail end of a film whilst browsing and looking for "The Queen's Gambit", so I haven't a clue. Have you watched 'The Queens Gambit and Ozark' both excellent series. Thank -you for a lovely comment my friend, felt like writing a spooky poem. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 12/14/2020 5:17:00 PM
This gal puts Cruella DaVille to shame! Nicely stitched together, Jennifer. ~ Shuddering and Shivering
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 12/16/2020 9:36:00 PM
Hi Gershon, shuddering and shivering,-merely a Christmas Eve scary story, some people like to watch these movies on TV on Christmas Eve. I wish you and yours a happy peaceful Christmas my friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 12/13/2020 9:37:00 PM
Hello Jennifer … a Christmas horror story. Not too many poems written on this subject - well done indeed Jennifer - Lindsay
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 12/13/2020 10:57:00 PM
No not at all many, and yet, on Christmas Eve, New Years Eve, Anniversaries, Valentines day - all these days have many suicides or horror movies made, I thought I would just be different, glad you enjoyed my friend, in case we don't' communicate before Christmas, may you and your family have a blessed one, Hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 12/13/2020 12:03:00 PM
WoW! Jennifer, What a tale you have penned with your talented pen. You held my attention from start to finish. A woman scorned popped in my mind as I was reading your well-written write. He should have thought twice before he got her bad side! So glad to hear it's fiction. Well done my friend from across the poem.Ps, Thanks for visiting me today and leaving such awesome comments. Enjoy the rest of your day:-) Alexis
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 12/13/2020 10:51:00 PM
Alexis, you are such a wonderful poetess and friend, from the moment I met you on soup, you and others I knew who would forever be my friends. Thank you for your awesome comment and may you be blessed always. Hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 12/13/2020 4:46:00 AM
P A I N - that is what I hear... and am glad to know it's all fiction!!! God Bless you always
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 12/13/2020 5:32:00 AM
My dear friend Gina, I know you were glad to hear it was fictitious because you are a kin and gentle poetess who I always love to hear from. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 12/13/2020 12:29:00 AM
Not a lady I'd want to meet anytime soon lol Hope you're well Tom
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 12/13/2020 5:07:00 AM
No, I think not. We are well thank-you Tom, hope all well across the pond also. Blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 12/12/2020 8:21:00 PM
Jennifer, There is a place we all hide when we're lonely. Tonight this place belongs to you. -Richard
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 12/13/2020 10:44:00 PM
Richard, but if it is pure fantasy ,there is no connection to how the writer feels, the interpretation lies solely with the reader. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 12/12/2020 2:19:00 PM
A sad story. She had guts to write with blood from her finger. Great work. ~~
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 12/13/2020 5:30:00 AM
Hi Victor yes I think her ego was shattered and her revenge was vengeful and hateful, But when fiction takes it's course we can write not from within ourselves but from releasing sheer terror, as was the ending of only 10 minutes of a movie that we accidentally came across. Thank-you for commenting, Hugs and

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