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Hypnotic Candlelight

stillness of the air — the flame tangoes with my breath groovy pinnacle gently hushed ...i dip my hand in lotion, warm vanilla 11/6/2019

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Date: 11/10/2019 7:28:00 PM
A sensual delight, Kim. Wonderfully done in tanka form!! ~ Wax-Melt
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Date: 11/10/2019 7:25:00 AM
Kim, a very imaginative poem about candle light with a powerful olfactory ending! A great post. / M
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/10/2019 11:11:00 AM
Thank you, dear poet!
Date: 11/9/2019 11:06:00 AM
Ooh sounds so sensual...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/10/2019 11:11:00 AM
Thank you, dear poet!
Date: 11/9/2019 4:37:00 AM
What a lovely feeling I have, and I can smell the vanilla now, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/9/2019 4:48:00 AM
Thanks, dear friend!
Date: 11/8/2019 8:32:00 PM
romantic.... Ann
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/8/2019 8:37:00 PM
Thanks, Ann! xx

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