Hyena Hygiene

I do not like the Hyena This animal couldn't look meaner It looks scary Ugly and hairy And dirty, I'd like him cleaner

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/3/2020 11:44:00 PM

Love this limerick. I cannot stop reading these Shirley and it is almost midnight!

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 6/29/2020 6:46:00 PM

Hello Shirley … very cunning but also necessary in its environment. Doesn't leave scrap; not even a bone - good limerick indeed - Lindsay

Shirley Hawkins
Date: 6/29/2020 8:42:00 PM

Hello LIndsay...very interesting comments Thank you, I did not know it was such a necessary animal, I feel more accepting toward it now I know it does such a good job .... Shirley

Rico Leffanta

Date: 6/29/2020 1:41:00 PM

It is a challenge to clean a bloody mess, as every butcher knows! Aloha! Rico

Shirley Hawkins
Date: 6/29/2020 8:51:00 PM

G'Day Rico, It seems from Lindsay's comments that the Hyena meets this challenge very well. find it ironic that it has a call that sounds like laughing...

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 6/29/2020 6:11:00 AM

last line well about Hyena Hygiene

Shirley Hawkins
Date: 6/29/2020 8:55:00 PM

Hi Mahtab, Thank you, for your welcome comment. I hope you have a pleasant day ...Shirley

Jenish Somadas

Date: 6/29/2020 2:41:00 AM

I don't like Hyena too.. People say looks may deceive, but not for Hyena..

Shirley Hawkins
Date: 6/29/2020 9:01:00 PM

That's true Jenish, what you see is what you get with this animal...