Hyena

Feral Exchange

I am well spotted and nasty and do not mind that description

Will gather my fortune whatever is your inappropriate depiction

Dig my teeth into your body and soul straight down to the bone

Leave my scent on your remains with a well-executed stepping stone


Once we hunted together and I took your lead and compassion

Now I chose to digest you in the most vicious contemptible fashion

Watch the smile in my fangs cutting deep into blood and intestine

Straight in the open with no secrets nor lies or honesty clandestine


A hyena must live up to her promise of laughing when stressed

Revenge and retribution is delivered with vengeance at best

Hurt is written on my posture and demeanour when I tear into carrion

I am the epitome of self-righteousness so please don’t call me vulgarian


When I stand upright above your decay you will fall on my sword

As a reward for finding me repulsive now but once had me adored

I’ll clean you because out a divorce is such an opportune affair

To thrive on your misfortune whereas I am cultured and debonair


You got me wrong folks I’m not dirty only clean up after the act

To call me foul or unsocial is totally wrong and dishonestly inexact

Know why I attack my once glorious protector it’s because I can

I got you cold out of balance and that has always been my master plan


‘Oh dear ex fellow hyena you might have forgotten one miniscule detail

In some sense only I’m quite similar to you and can rip out your entrails

But I won’t let’s be clear about virtuous living and ethical behaviour

By retorting with similar greed I would merely be your victim role saviour’


‘I am also a hyena in a way that most humans will never comprehend

Simply because they are your models of ignorance and I will remand

You in your own prison meanwhile I found myself another cuddly companion

Go sharpen your claws if you want but I’ll feast on love and kind understanding’



01st July 2019

Pick a Title Vol 6 Personification Contest

Sponsor: Edward Ibeh

Title chosen: Hyena

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 7/20/2019 11:34:00 AM
Congrats on your win...a wonderful ending!
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 7/21/2019 7:48:00 AM
Thank you Jeanne. I appreciate that. Kind wishes, Kai
Date: 7/20/2019 11:19:00 AM
Wonderful, captivating poem, Kai:-) You really captured the true nature of The Hyena! Congratulations on your win in my contest!
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 7/21/2019 7:49:00 AM
Thanks a lot Edward. Best wishes, Kai
Date: 7/1/2019 11:46:00 PM
Wow Kai after reading the bulk of your poem I wasn't expecting your ending. I think I may have known a hyena or two in my life time! Wonderfully expressive and creative my friend! : )
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 7/2/2019 2:31:00 AM
Thank you Connie. To be honest and quite often when I am writing a poem, I do not know where it takes me. Lots of wishes, Kai
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