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Hydrangeas

Two poetic mobiles ~ happy or sad, take your pick Weeping hydrangeas spill sapphire tears falling, drenching grey scale gardens suspended, free flowing a mobile of distractions on tiny threads scattered above clouded daydreams Worded floating silent streams, spinning slowly, creating phrases on whirlwind petals, browned edges frame whispered wonderings sans answers ‘pon somber breezes of yesterday’s questions or A cappella hydrangeas send harmonic petals floating ‘pon melodic wind chime breezes, suspended soft concerto clouds on love sonnet strings tuned to a spring day, as flowering symphonies, acoustic mobiles of emotion bloom within a garden of daffodils dreams in unison with lyrical compositions of nature’s enchanting song and the sunrise sings along

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 9/10/2017 2:19:00 PM
Much prefer the second but the irony ager you in both are awesome:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/7/2017 8:16:00 AM
Must I choose? Both are very good. It is ponderlicious to see both sides of topic.
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Date: 9/7/2017 8:09:00 AM
Wow, Chris, you are a versatile genius poet, I love both the poems:)
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Date: 9/1/2017 10:45:00 AM
Hi Chris, I prefer the " happy" poem however they both are well written with amazing imagery- Alexis
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Date: 9/1/2017 12:20:00 AM
To answer the question... both, for the balance? But other wise the first one. You know I like sad poetry
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Date: 8/31/2017 4:49:00 PM
The second one, definitely. That's three long poems today. Are you a real person or just some verse machine?
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