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Hybrid

With a hunger to grow,
and with reasons unknown,
seduced by the scent, 
who knows what extent 
of the science behind
the twining of two
roses that bloom 
on the old garden wall?

One with a strawberries' hue
winds it's limbs on a vine.
It has grown to the sky,
draping over the stones

In the labyrinth of time,
on the wall's other side,
are warm petals of peach,
leafy tendrils that reach,
to capture the light.

They will gently collide,
then will twist to unite
with the alien's climb.
But, then,, something divine
reminds us anew.

Somehow we find
small miracles do
arise from things, old, 
reborn and renewed.

There's a new rose in bloom ~

Two species have joined
to blend into one,
becoming a jewel
with the glorious colors of sun


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4/4/16  Contest: New Species
Resubmitted for Contest :"Any Poem Written In April 2016"
Sponsor: Laura Loo
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dietrich Avatar
July 15, 2016 at 5:10 PM
so beautiful, Carrie. this is wonderful. Congrats in the recent contest.
Scars Avatar
July 15, 2016 at 11:31 AM
Carrie, this is awesome lady! congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo
K. Avatar
May 25, 2016 at 11:07 AM
Hello dear Carrie!! Yay!You finally posted an audio of yours, and you bet I am smiling right now, upon hearing you-happy to hear you! I really like how your voice is so sweet- :) my favorite part here was when you were reciting the 3rd stanza...I really enjoyed your poem and listening to you :) It's fascinating how you were able to depict the creation of a new hybrid, almost like a love story... btw I hope you don't mind me pointing out-- I believe that for L2S2, that should be "its"?
Kimathi Avatar
April 13, 2016 at 7:42 AM
Congrats Carrie, for your well-deserved first placement in the contest!!! ;-)
Mark Avatar
April 10, 2016 at 2:54 AM
i knew this would be up there on a podium, just pleased you added that syllable to add meter to that trip line,... well done ,..
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 8, 2016 at 2:14 PM
I love how brilliantly you have expressed the merge of this new rose Carrie. Congratulations on your deserving first placement! #7. ;)
Warrior Avatar
April 6, 2016 at 11:26 PM
Congrats! my friend Carrie...a well deserved win...nature is the grand master...god bless...^WW^
A   Avatar
April 6, 2016 at 9:41 PM
Nice going Carrie, Congrats on your "New Species win." LINDA
Misra Avatar
April 6, 2016 at 12:00 PM
Beautifully written. Congrats on your well deserved win.
Devnath  Avatar
April 6, 2016 at 8:31 AM
Congrats on your win with this beautiful poem my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
A. Sharma Avatar
April 6, 2016 at 1:56 AM
Magnificent write Carrie.. congrats on top podium..
Smith Avatar
April 5, 2016 at 7:42 PM
Wonderful win, congratulations Carrie...
Mark Avatar
April 5, 2016 at 11:05 AM
Very well crafted word " arise" you did great with your word choice, great write Carrie, ....ya back ??
Mark Avatar
April 5, 2016 at 1:21 AM
Now young lady this is beautiful ,..it sings and enchants , the meter is almost ..Almost perfect,..only one little flaw and thats 5th stanza 3rd line, it feels like a lifted carpet, i think it needs another syllable ? perhap "come from some things old" ? just needs a syllable
Richards Avatar
April 5, 2016 at 9:19 AM
yes, I agree, another syllable would flow much more smoothly! Thanks for the input once again :)
Turner Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 6:51 PM
Really nice Carrie. Nature can sure do beautiful things given enough time. Good luck in contest. Peace my friend:)
Allison Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 6:30 PM
Carrie I love your fabulous unique take on the theme - what a superb idea to think of a flower:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
Richards Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 6:37 PM
Thank you Jan, for your always generous comments !! So appreciated !:)
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