Hvac

Hot dry passage of the unwalked space
How so do Arctic winds leave your halls?

All around is naught but ore,
where dust has all but settled.

Come hither, freeze my soul
For amongst the flame of life
I stand and sweat

The drones slave on.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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March 6, 2013 at 2:20 PM
liking it, air conditioning? perhaps improved by rhyme scheme or rhythm, just something to mediate on in the future
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