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Hot dry passage of the unwalked space How so do Arctic winds leave your halls? All around is naught but ore, where dust has all but settled. Come hither, freeze my soul For amongst the flame of life I stand and sweat The drones slave on.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 3/6/2013 2:20:00 PM
liking it, air conditioning? perhaps improved by rhyme scheme or rhythm, just something to mediate on in the future
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