Emma Buckeridge Poet Verse

Hutain This One

HUTAIN THIS ONE...

Dancing mystic lights burn through me
Blur my vision and my mood
Watch the night becoming lively
Can you see how I’m confused?
My energy has raised the roof
These lights are dancing like lightning 
Twist and swirl round me when I'm move
Force of nature - so exciting!



By Emma Buckeridge 28th July 2011

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Lee Ramage August 4, 2011 at 8:53 PM Very nice. Congratulations on your win. Lee

Dr.Ram Mehta August 4, 2011 at 1:39 PM Congratulations on the win in the contest of nette, Emma

Jack Horne August 4, 2011 at 11:47 AM Wow, so many contest results again! Many congrats for all your wins : )

Carol Sunshine Brown August 4, 2011 at 9:31 AM Congratulations on your placement in Nette's "Hutain" contest Emma. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich August 4, 2011 at 12:03 AM Emma, this is so nice. I love how you decided to interpret those lights! Congrats on your win.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 3, 2011 at 5:48 PM Congrats Emma on an exciting win in Hutain poetry contest with these awesome lines luv..kudos...

Caryl Ramsdale August 3, 2011 at 3:37 PM Congratulations on your win in the HUTAIN THIS ONE...contest sponsored by Nette Onclaud. Good job! Blessings, Caryl

Carol Sunshine Brown July 28, 2011 at 3:50 PM Wonderful creative writing today Emma. I will be back soon to read more if the gremlins in PoetrySoup will permit. Love, Carol