Hutain This One

HUTAIN THIS ONE...

Dancing mystic lights burn through me
Blur my vision and my mood
Watch the night becoming lively
Can you see how I’m confused?
My energy has raised the roof
These lights are dancing like lightning 
Twist and swirl round me when I'm move
Force of nature - so exciting!



By Emma Buckeridge 28th July 2011

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 8/4/2011 8:53:00 PM
Very nice. Congratulations on your win. Lee
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Date: 8/4/2011 1:39:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of nette, Emma
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Date: 8/4/2011 11:47:00 AM
Wow, so many contest results again! Many congrats for all your wins : )
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Date: 8/4/2011 9:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Nette's "Hutain" contest Emma. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/4/2011 12:03:00 AM
Emma, this is so nice. I love how you decided to interpret those lights! Congrats on your win.
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Date: 8/3/2011 5:48:00 PM
Congrats Emma on an exciting win in Hutain poetry contest with these awesome lines luv..kudos...
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Date: 8/3/2011 3:37:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the HUTAIN THIS ONE...contest sponsored by Nette Onclaud. Good job! Blessings, Caryl
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Date: 7/28/2011 3:50:00 PM
Wonderful creative writing today Emma. I will be back soon to read more if the gremlins in PoetrySoup will permit. Love, Carol
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