Hustler

Written: June 03, 2025 For Contest SPIN A SHADORMA 
Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud

Checked by HMS.com, 3/5/3/3/7/5

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hustler's street
throbbing like a vein
guide chore girl
moist air clings
labyrinth shadows converge
show fragmented selves

analogyshadorma

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Victor Buhagiar

June 5, 2025 at 5:08 AM

In Malta we had Strait street, where hustlers roamed and harlot got paid somehow. It is a quiet place now, but not in other places. Fine poem.

Paige Hind

June 4, 2025 at 1:03 PM

You did this so perfectly. Each image, such a picture, Sotto.

Anne-Lise Andresen

June 4, 2025 at 9:06 AM

- This was really well written... I think you posted a top winner, Las :) - hugs

Ink Empress

June 4, 2025 at 4:56 AM

I really love this form, but not many contests that would appreciate this form, I didnt like the prompts provided so maybe i should do it for your contest ? :) dr sotto youv described and depicted the prompt so well in your shadorma! I especially love "hustler's street throbbing like a vein guide chore girl" excellent entrance to your word weaving! Best wishes! Sending you light always.