Hustler

Written: June 03, 2025 For Contest SPIN A SHADORMA Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud Checked by HMS.com, 3/5/3/3/7/5 ******************** hustler's street throbbing like a vein guide chore girl moist air clings labyrinth shadows converge show fragmented selves

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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/5/2025 5:08:00 AM

In Malta we had Strait street, where hustlers roamed and harlot got paid somehow. It is a quiet place now, but not in other places. Fine poem.

Paige Hind

Date: 6/4/2025 1:03:00 PM

You did this so perfectly. Each image, such a picture, Sotto.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/4/2025 9:06:00 AM

- This was really well written... I think you posted a top winner, Las :) - hugs

Ink Empress

Date: 6/4/2025 4:56:00 AM

I really love this form, but not many contests that would appreciate this form, I didnt like the prompts provided so maybe i should do it for your contest ? :) dr sotto youv described and depicted the prompt so well in your shadorma! I especially love "hustler's street throbbing like a vein guide chore girl" excellent entrance to your word weaving! Best wishes! Sending you light always.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/3/2025 6:08:00 PM

Indeed, they are fragments of themselves, shadows.

Duke Beaufort

Date: 6/3/2025 5:05:00 PM

SP, an interesting view of the street scene for sure. We try to be whole and ethical, but that is not so easy in this frenetic world. Smiles!!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/3/2025 2:09:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Hustler" write. "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a blessed day.............