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Husky

For now, you are gone (or so it feels) and so are my eye's All I ask, is for one occasion in this life Where I can bless your ear's with my explanation Written words for me this far have been unkind they have failed me Constant mistakes from a passionate and misunderstood soul Possibly unaware, you drift on  A gentle, beautiful breeze It whisks you away on a whim of your own discomfort You alone FEEL what you know is true However, so do I A private, lonely mind and one simple, needed and wanted communication It has been denied (as you feel) If only I could talk, questions that would taste rich with honesty, feeling and amusement Say anything, anything and it will be greeted with a perfected calm. An honest response would ease (I know it would) and illuminate your kind nature A nature, existence, person, communication My mind and eye's truly, deeply miss...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/8/2013 2:18:00 PM
Kristopher Curran :-) your poem has been a wonderful write to find on the soups front page... '"Congratulations"" with your awesome featured poem of the week... always~ LINDA
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Date: 6/6/2012 6:05:00 AM
This is explicitly awesome. I love the piece so much and I think I will be checking on your other wonderful works... Its a blessing coming to your page and I hope you do well to stop by too. Once again, nice work.
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Date: 5/23/2012 5:03:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Kristopher. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/22/2012 2:39:00 PM
So sad....touching poem... - Wish you all the best. - - Anne-Lise
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