Husky

For now, you are gone (or so it 
feels) and so are my eye's
All I ask, is for one occasion in 
this life
Where I can bless your ear's 
with my explanation
Written words for me this far 
have been unkind
they have failed me
Constant mistakes from a 
passionate and misunderstood 
soul
Possibly unaware, you drift on 
A gentle, beautiful breeze
It whisks you away on a whim 
of your own discomfort
You alone FEEL what you know 
is true
However, so do I
A private, lonely mind and one 
simple, needed and wanted 
communication
It has been denied (as you feel)
If only I could talk, questions 
that would taste rich with 
honesty, feeling and 
amusement
Say anything, anything and it 
will be greeted with a perfected 
calm.
An honest response would ease 
(I know it would) and illuminate 
your kind nature
A nature, existence, person, 
communication
My mind and eye's truly, deeply 
miss...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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January 8, 2013 at 2:18 PM
Kristopher Curran :-) your poem has been a wonderful write to find on the soups front page... '"Congratulations"" with your awesome featured poem of the week... always~ LINDA
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June 6, 2012 at 6:05 AM
This is explicitly awesome. I love the piece so much and I think I will be checking on your other wonderful works... Its a blessing coming to your page and I hope you do well to stop by too. Once again, nice work.
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May 23, 2012 at 5:03 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Kristopher. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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May 22, 2012 at 2:39 PM
So sad....touching poem... - Wish you all the best. - - Anne-Lise
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