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Hushed Night

I, me and myself in the dark stillness Surfeit with the liberty of absolution My thoughts float along with the silence Of the tranquil gliding fish in my aquarium The moonbeams peeping through the sheers Are warmed by the glow of the gold fish I relax on the easy chair with my eyes shut Soft music plays on welling up my emotions Its calming effect is soul rending and it works me To a catharsis with strong currents of rivulets Bursting down my cheeks uncontrollably The fish swim in warm waters as I in saline tears I soak my pensive mood in verses in this hushed night June 14, 2016 For Nayda Ivette Negron

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 6/14/2016 10:44:00 AM
Congrats. This a nice poem. I like the words used.
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 6/17/2016 11:04:00 AM
Thanks for your appreciation, Sunita!
Date: 6/14/2016 1:00:00 AM
Wow, excellent exposition. It's good to see your name featuring in the winners list again and again, Balveen. Congratulations! ~karam~
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 6/17/2016 11:03:00 AM
That's so sweet of you, Karam!
Date: 6/13/2016 8:14:00 PM
Congratulations Balveen on the placement of the contest
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 6/13/2016 8:55:00 PM
So quick? Wow! Thanks Nayda!

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