hush the blush

meditating with a purpose
in as seeking an outcome 
signals we are in delusion
best we pause the cause
and simply sit in silence 
allowing the universe
to be the transmitter 
while we simply receive
the offerings as may be
as is wont of a receptor
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Ray Choudhury Avatar
January 12, 2024 at 3:49 PM
Your poem presents deep reflection, and spirituality. I try to meditate sometimes, but I feel calmer listening to some songs, or myself singing some spiritual songs. Thank you for visiting my blog, and leaving an inspiring comment. Hope you enjoyed the book with Tagore's translations. I am travelling to India soon. Best wishes ~
Seeker Avatar
January 12, 2024 at 8:46 PM
Thank you for your uplifting comment, Mala. Yes, the Tagore translations were simply sublime :)
One Avatar
January 12, 2024 at 10:13 AM
I have never meditated but I see the benefit for others.. nicely done..
Seeker Avatar
January 12, 2024 at 8:44 PM
The fact that we are alive and aware is meditation enough! The rest is simply observing mindfully, softening attention, feeling rather than thinking.
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