Nette Onclaud Poet Sijo

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Hush of Gold Asters--Visual 5

While a lattice of gold asters sheds its dangled petals, 
I cringe against the intrusion from rainfall's unforgiving wind.
Through night's hush, moist blooms graze my arms scenting my quietude.


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Andrea Dietrich’s Glorious Sijo Fields
Visual  No.5

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Skat A February 15, 2015 at 10:50 PM NETTE, Awesome take, Congrats in Andrea's Sijo contest. -- SKAT

Eve Roper February 15, 2015 at 10:00 PM Andrea, congratulations on this beautiful descriptive win. 7 Blessings

Dr. Upma A. Sharma February 11, 2015 at 1:28 AM Ah that's a creative masterpiece my dear friend Nette! Congrats on big win!

Monterey Sirak February 10, 2015 at 8:10 AM This is glorious, filled with lush images. You shine in this form.

Sara Kendrick February 8, 2015 at 5:27 PM Way to go with this winner..Congrats on the gold..Sara

Jan Allison February 8, 2015 at 2:11 PM Dropping back with my congrats Nette:-) hugs Jan xx

Frederic Parker February 8, 2015 at 10:56 AM For me I would have placed it higher a truly beautiful poem..congratulations

Carrie Richards February 8, 2015 at 10:17 AM Oh my goodness.......this beauty would rate higher with me..., the melancholy quality makes me cringe against any intrusion of the moments while reading. A big congratulations, Nette!

Richard Lamoureux February 8, 2015 at 8:18 AM Still Gorgeous, congratulations!

Connie Marcum Wong February 8, 2015 at 5:13 AM Ahh you meld with the blossoms in this perfect Sijo Nette. Big congts on your win!

Mohan Chutani February 8, 2015 at 4:34 AM Nette, there seems to be a touch of sadness in your Sijo that lets you to be an inalienable part of the field you describe. Congrats for fine win.

Paul Callus February 8, 2015 at 4:14 AM Love the honeyed mellow gentleness that seeps from these words, Nette. Perfect ending line. #7 Congrats on a much deserved win. // paul

Andrea Dietrich February 8, 2015 at 12:47 AM I do believe YOU were the only one to choose THIS picture, Nette. As always, your imagery is stunning. Congrats in my contest.

Kash Poet February 7, 2015 at 4:39 AM A lovely Sijo by you Nette!

Liam Mcdaid February 5, 2015 at 8:17 PM beautiful imaginary nette excellent pen dear pal

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty February 5, 2015 at 4:47 AM O glorious nette...love

Richard Lamoureux February 4, 2015 at 8:34 AM Gorgeous Nette!

Avijeet Das February 3, 2015 at 11:53 PM Dear Nette, This poem is simply amazing..... Kudos on writing a great poem!

David Meade February 2, 2015 at 10:06 PM Asters anointing the soft skin of a poetess . . . sweet is the image. 7

Frederic Parker February 2, 2015 at 6:55 PM This sijo.. is.. glorious my poetic friend..your last line is perfect to tie it all together

Tim Smith February 2, 2015 at 5:52 PM Very beautiful and serene...huggs Tim

Jan Allison February 2, 2015 at 2:11 PM Such brilliant imagery Nette - your pen is golden my friend:-) hugs Jan xxx

Ken Carroll February 2, 2015 at 12:59 PM Lovely write Nette.. Rich with imagery..

Anne-Lise Andresen February 2, 2015 at 12:39 PM - Beautiful - I wish you best of luck in contest, Nette - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick February 2, 2015 at 12:12 PM Awesome way to go for the contest..Reads like a winner..Broken hearts and earthquakes make for a weepy work thanks for reading. Sara

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