Line Gauthier Poet Rhyme

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hush my heart

long night
starlight
under a moon
that swoons

waiting
longing
pulling at straws
our life on pause

token promises
hits and misses
while darkness looms
silence speaks volumes



AP: 2nd place 2025

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John Read October 20, 2024 at 12:30 PM I hear you loud and clear Line, my life has been on pause for quite a while. Xx Line Gauthier October 21, 2024 at 7:54 AM Thanks for the much appreciated visit and comment, John. Have a fabulous day ~

Arthur Vaso October 20, 2024 at 1:15 AM Such a beautiful poem, and I needed to read something of such beauty and tranquility! :) Line Gauthier October 21, 2024 at 7:53 AM Thank you very much, Arthur. Have a lovely day ~