Hush

Voicing one's secrets can drip like wax into the canals of perked ears.

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Sandy Ivy D

Date: 5/30/2013 9:07:00 PM

very clever. a nice 7 SandyIvy

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 11/27/2012 5:33:00 PM

Do you mean that it's heated and runny, or that it hardens and remains but a secret? It's a shame that it took foul weather to bring back to your writes, John...I'd always enjoyed reading them! Hope things are picking up and pulling back together for you! Keep well.....Mikki :)

Deborah Burch

Date: 7/10/2012 5:08:00 PM

Brilliant!! :D love this...deb

Farah Chamma

Date: 3/19/2011 7:40:00 AM

Wonderful write. Intelligent =) Thank you for sharing

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/4/2010 2:29:00 PM

Awesome imagery on secret telling!

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 12/3/2010 9:38:00 AM

Outsanding,love this hush hush sound : )

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/22/2010 5:09:00 PM

oh, i never thought of it like that lol,,very cool one, enjoyed your write...P.D.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/22/2010 3:32:00 PM

Awesome statement made here, John. My ears are perked and ready to absorb the secrets. This is a new form for me and I like the way you work in it. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/22/2010 12:51:00 PM

WoW John.. I luv this piece... a great visual from your gifted pen my friend.. enjoyed John with luv..

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 9/22/2010 11:52:00 AM

so true...a little hot wax might run them off....LOL