Hush

Voicing
one's secrets
can drip like wax
into the canals of
perked ears.

inspirationalcinqku

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Sandy Ivy D

May 30, 2013 at 9:07 PM

very clever. a nice 7 SandyIvy

Michelle Mac Donald

November 27, 2012 at 5:33 PM

Do you mean that it's heated and runny, or that it hardens and remains but a secret? It's a shame that it took foul weather to bring back to your writes, John...I'd always enjoyed reading them! Hope things are picking up and pulling back together for you! Keep well.....Mikki :)

Deborah Burch

July 10, 2012 at 5:08 PM

Brilliant!! :D love this...deb

Farah Chamma

March 19, 2011 at 7:40 AM

Wonderful write. Intelligent =) Thank you for sharing

Andrea Dietrich

December 4, 2010 at 2:29 PM

Awesome imagery on secret telling!

C.C Bloomsfield

December 3, 2010 at 9:38 AM

Outsanding,love this hush hush sound : )

Poet Destroyer A

September 22, 2010 at 5:09 PM

oh, i never thought of it like that lol,,very cool one, enjoyed your write...P.D.

Carolyn Devonshire

September 22, 2010 at 3:32 PM

Awesome statement made here, John. My ears are perked and ready to absorb the secrets. This is a new form for me and I like the way you work in it. Love, Carolyn