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Husband To Be

Your the man of my dreams, My husband to be. The one i'll love, My perfect dove. You hold me tight, and we almost never fight. We're perfect people, Me and you, And we fit like a puzzle. I'll love you forever, And I know you'll love me too. You have long hair, Same as me. And those perfect eyes, Way better than mine. And that great personality, Better than any i could find. and that smile is the best of it all, No matter what i say, you couldn't be in denial

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Date: 6/2/2013 9:56:00 PM
Finally getting to your poems. It would be great to see you around mine if you have the time. I hope you don't mind all this criticism, but I can't stop editing everything I read. Good job on the description here. It could just be my opinion, but the ending seems a little awkward. Abrupt maybe. If it were mine, I would tuck that ending somewhere in the verses or add a little more on the end.
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Date: 5/18/2013 2:59:00 PM
Hi Danielle, a lovely thought... i like it... Linda
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