Hurts

When it hurts to be alive,
There is no explanation for,
Why its like this,
Just want to sever these ties.

Ive given up,
Sick of these things,
Ashamed of myself,
Because I am a stranger in this world.

With no one to hold my hand,
I just want to go far away.
I loved too much,
So I'll die too young.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 3/17/2013 8:23:00 PM
OMG your so amazing.. its like you're in my head.. OMG i think we are meant to be. Can i have your babies?
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Timmy Mahfood
Date: 3/17/2013 8:37:00 PM
love you too babe <3
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Tamera Mahfood
Date: 3/17/2013 8:36:00 PM
:D Yes! see i knew we were meant to be:D i love you baby<3
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Timmy Mahfood
Date: 3/17/2013 8:35:00 PM
oh hai there, your actually pretty good looking, meet you at the front door in 2
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Tamera Mahfood
Date: 3/17/2013 8:34:00 PM
Noo please just give me a chance. Let's talk.. I'm outside in your tree.
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Timmy Mahfood
Date: 3/17/2013 8:31:00 PM
i appreciate your positive feedback and stuff tamera, but i think you need to find someone who has true feelings for you. Ive been hurt before, and from your poem it seems like you have too... dont give up hope
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Tamera Mahfood
Date: 3/17/2013 8:29:00 PM
What do you mean Yeah? i thought we had a connection:'(.. please dont do this to me baby. i hope one day we can actually talk. i love you.. please say you love me too?
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Timmy Mahfood
Date: 3/17/2013 8:24:00 PM
Yeah haha
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