Hurting

staring at the wall 
tears run down my face. 
no one understands 
while im staring into space. 

My life feels out of place. 

I cant explain the feeling 
but it shows in what i write. 
all thats in my future 
is a dead end thats in sight.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Sellman Avatar
June 27, 2012 at 6:32 AM
I know exactly how you feel its like no better way to express it than to write it. I love this
Konos Avatar
June 4, 2012 at 8:53 AM
No Stacy! You are very talented....and obviously the Lord has heard your prayers as you are writing poetry that not only touches the soul but has so much interest that we can hardly wait for you to write another....and another.......
O'Leary Avatar
June 4, 2012 at 7:40 AM
I hope the dead end doesn't hinder your future poems... nice... Terry
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