H.U.R.T.I.N.G.

Hurting is he?
Until now the pain was all mine.
Ripples of anguish fill me even now.
Thrusting their way into my life.
Imploring my heart to remember.
Never allowing my soul Forget. 
Giddiness fills me as I see him suffer.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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August 22, 2008 at 10:39 AM
Patricia - I reckon everyone should should suffer the pain of their actions- My emotions regarding finding joy in others pain deserved or not causes me to have mixed emotions over this poem because I feel strongly about holding compassion for others - I hope that all came out right because I do treasure you and who you are - God Bless
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