Hurt N Mine - Hurting Mind

It is only natural
That something so compelling
Would've acquired the cruel's admiral
You're hurt and i give you my heart as a dwelling

The final word is yours
I want to be done with tours
Stop for a moment
Breath you in
Forget about the torment
Of not knowing your demons within


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February 12, 2016 at 9:23 PM
Fred, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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