Hurt

What's wrong with me? Am I to weird. Weird enough for you to hurt my heart. Am I just not your type that you don't want me in your life. Am I not pretty enough you thought I was cause I'm big. Am I just not the right person that doesn't meet your standards. What's wrong with me? I ask you to not hurt me or try to change me. I ask for you to except me for who I am not who you want me to be. I ask for the love you would give to someone that you actually loved. I ask for you to be mine so we can try till we can't try no more.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/7/2016 1:23:00 PM

Desirea Reese, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 9/3/2016 8:38:00 PM

Desirea, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT