Hurt

so someone badgered you threw their words at you they splintered like sticks they broke the skin like stones you swallowed your heart you lost the movement of your watch i'm sorry they attacked you unprovoked later i'll remind you bruises heal but for now show me where it hurts think of my sincere concern as that kiss your mom use to place there later i'll remind you some people are unfair because they are and that's that block them out there are others who are kind who have words that penetrate the thickest of skulls who inject love like a vaccine who prevent the black plague hate from spreading but for now it’s about you you feel alone you feel no one understands you feel abandoned and you feel just plain bad really bad i understand the puncture a rhinos horn leaves unaware of the harm they left because their hide is thick there are those of us who are like you sensitive we've read your tears we've watched you all these years and we are pleased to be in your company so take the time you need to heal and don't forget we are here

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 11/14/2014 8:41:00 PM
by the way, I am coming close to the point where I began seeing almost all the poems you were writing. But I am hoping to find many that I did not see yet: ones to look forward to!! Have a wonderful evening, and I hope it is not as cold there as it is here!!!
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Date: 11/14/2014 8:40:00 PM
Maurice, this one shows your tender side so well. Was it written for anyone special? I really like it and can't believe I am the ONLY comment here at this one!! I will have to fave this one and hope others one day find it. I broke my rule about going straight to judge my contest. After I saw you had commented to so many of my poems I just had to come here and say thank you thank you so much . I love seeing what you think of the poems that I have chosen as my personal faves! Tell me YOURS!!
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