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Hurt

I loved you with passion But realised you were in motion First you called it love! Never a word of gratitude You left me in solitude illusioned by love. I could not understand Why you could not stand The quality of my love. You took me captive Before I could see the motive Since I was in illusion of love. But now I know It was just a show You never love! I could not play I allowed you away 'coz that's the pain of love!

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Date: 10/16/2018 12:14:00 PM
Well penned poem about deceptive love. The hurt seems so raw. Well done ~Warren
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Brian Lusimbo
Date: 10/18/2018 9:35:00 AM
Thank you Doll. I feel inspired to explore more in poetry.

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