Hurricanes

Heat conjured the atmosphere, conception began 
Upsurge in pressures stirs water, birthing Nature’s Giants
Roaring sound with mixed helicopter-lion, ranting on the ocean
Ready to visit nearby lands, better prepare, don’t run!
Immersion is so strong, horrifying wind at 120 to 200 mphour
Can’t be controlled, God keep us safe if we stick to prayers
Apart not of our life, visitors of our nation several times a year
Nearest to coastal areas are more on danger and at risk.
Embrace reality, brace their atrocity but trust our Father Almighty
Safety is also yours on evacuation, don’t postpone my Dearie!







Sept.12,  2017   6.03am
 
Third Place
Contest: Hurricanes
Judged:9/12/2017
Sponsor: Poet Julie Rodeheaver

enduranceacrostic

♡Like0

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Arthur Vaso

September 15, 2017 at 9:02 PM

Great Acrostic, I hope you weren't in the hurricane!!! I see congrats are in order too!!

Len Gasun

September 23, 2017 at 9:47 PM

Thanks a lot my dear friend, Art. Hurricanes always pay for a visit back home, but not here in my borrowed place, very from huge bodies of water. Thanks a lot. Hugs.

Ravindra K Kapoor

September 15, 2017 at 9:24 AM

Very nice short poem on the reality and the disaster people are facing in America. "but trust our Father Almighty Safety is also yours on evacuation". Congrats on your win dear friend. It is long since I could not visit your pages and even of my other friends too. Hope you are keeping fine. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra K Kapoor

Len Gasun

September 23, 2017 at 9:42 PM

I'm glad to see you back my dear friend. Thank you so much for stopping by, your congratulatory comments and loving wishes. Likewise my dear. Time was not anymore generous for me to let me do things I mostly enjoyed. But, I should remain hopeful. Thanks a lot and more blessings! Hugs.