Hurricanes

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Heat conjured the atmosphere, conception began Upsurge in pressures stirs water, birthing Nature’s Giants Roaring sound with mixed helicopter-lion, ranting on the ocean Ready to visit nearby lands, better prepare, don’t run! Immersion is so strong, horrifying wind at 120 to 200 mphour Can’t be controlled, God keep us safe if we stick to prayers Apart not of our life, visitors of our nation several times a year Nearest to coastal areas are more on danger and at risk. Embrace reality, brace their atrocity but trust our Father Almighty Safety is also yours on evacuation, don’t postpone my Dearie! Sept.12, 2017 6.03am Third Place Contest: Hurricanes Judged:9/12/2017 Sponsor: Poet Julie Rodeheaver

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Arthur Vaso

Date: 9/15/2017 9:02:00 PM

Great Acrostic, I hope you weren't in the hurricane!!! I see congrats are in order too!!

Len Gasun
Date: 9/23/2017 9:47:00 PM

Thanks a lot my dear friend, Art. Hurricanes always pay for a visit back home, but not here in my borrowed place, very from huge bodies of water. Thanks a lot. Hugs.

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 9/15/2017 9:24:00 AM

Very nice short poem on the reality and the disaster people are facing in America. "but trust our Father Almighty Safety is also yours on evacuation". Congrats on your win dear friend. It is long since I could not visit your pages and even of my other friends too. Hope you are keeping fine. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra K Kapoor

Len Gasun
Date: 9/23/2017 9:42:00 PM

I'm glad to see you back my dear friend. Thank you so much for stopping by, your congratulatory comments and loving wishes. Likewise my dear. Time was not anymore generous for me to let me do things I mostly enjoyed. But, I should remain hopeful. Thanks a lot and more blessings! Hugs.

Eve Roper

Date: 9/13/2017 8:40:00 PM

Galeo, congratulations on your win hugs Eve

Len Gasun
Date: 9/23/2017 9:25:00 PM

Thanks a lot my dear friend, Eve. Hugs.

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/12/2017 10:12:00 AM

Congratulations Galeo :)

Len Gasun
Date: 9/23/2017 9:24:00 PM

Thanks a lot my dear friend, Heidi. Hugs.