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Hurricane of Grief

Standing on the sands of helplessness, as waves of sadness lap at my feet   I know not what holds your voice hostage, unable to comfort it only baffles At an ocean's length of pain, an essence cannot even take wing on a breeze So sadness is held in a blanket of love If the heart is not mended, then love's breath cannot bring it back A storm of uncertainty tries to overtake A need to absorb the pain,   making it taste of wanting to be lessened If not stated where sadness is born, all attempts to bring joy back fails As waves grow building up, into a hurricane of grief Drops of uncertainty, fall on my face then raging faster While threatening to drown   the only hope,   of two halves to become whole
An older poem!;)

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Date: 10/26/2019 11:02:00 PM
A 'Hurricane of Grief' -- so expressive of the waves of tears. Perspicacious penning, Brenda. Warmest wishes and poetry cheer! :) :)
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/26/2019 11:05:00 PM
Gershon thank you so much and still bringing smile to my face my friend! Thank you!;)
Date: 10/26/2019 1:34:00 AM
One word for this: AWESOME!! Incredible piece of creative artistry, Brenda. Without a shadow of a doubt one of your very best. In appreciation. :) john P.s should be published.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/26/2019 3:33:00 AM
Haha! Thank you so much John!;) you truly are too sweet to me!;) thank you for your call last night.... I do luv it when you read to me and for as bad as I was feeling you brought a smile to my face!;)
Date: 10/25/2019 10:10:00 PM
So beautiful and intriguing. A heartfelt write. God bless you with many more and much love, Gina
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/26/2019 3:31:00 AM
Regina thank you so very much!;)
Date: 10/25/2019 5:20:00 PM
Melancholy of madness, meet me for happy hour
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/25/2019 8:35:00 PM
HAhaha! But if course T ! Thank you !
Date: 10/25/2019 3:18:00 PM
Simply beautiful this poem be, Brenda! The depth of emotion expressed is like passing dolphins of serenity. Your talented pen soothes the aching soul. Love and hugs always.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/25/2019 8:34:00 PM
Ahhh Freddie thank you so very much! Loved your comment my friend!;) You have been missed you know!;)
Date: 10/25/2019 11:05:00 AM
powerful force behind your pen...emotions run deep...i like this though, wonderful penning...
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/25/2019 1:43:00 PM
Thank you Sandy so very. Much!;)
Date: 10/25/2019 9:24:00 AM
Great one Brenda! :)
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/25/2019 10:08:00 AM
Heidi thank you so much!;)
Date: 10/25/2019 8:34:00 AM
This was really good Brenda. Deep emotions have come to the surface in this poem of longing. Nicely done.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/25/2019 10:08:00 AM
Thank you Chris! Much appreciated.

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